Starfish Girl

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110 of my 925 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 117 votes

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Revenge, flash fiction

A challenge at my writing class to write flash fiction, take an existing story and cut it to 200 words. Not sure it works, I prefer original. Could I...

Chicks

She watched and was beguiled by the look of complete concentration. A small pink tongue was held captive by a set of perfectly formed teeth and the...

Old Girls

Another writing class exercise, a scene with at least 5 characters how to introduce them without 'he said, she said' etc. Not sure they each said...

Guy Laroche

A writing class challenge to write a story in the Gothic genre. Guy opened his eyes, stretched and yawned. For the first time in ages he felt at...
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Cherry

An Alternate Voice

A different view of my writing class! Michael stretched each of his limbs carefully. As the stretch reached his toes they quivered slightly. He then...

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110 of my comments have received 117 Great Feedback votes

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It seems that 'the ones'

Posted on Tue, 01 Apr 2014

It seems that 'the ones' existance did not deserve a name, was just there, until the very last line where dreams can't be stifled.

Quite chilling.

Lindy

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Posted in The One...

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Simple and short but so muche

Posted on Thu, 27 Mar 2014

Simple and short but so muche there.

Lindy

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Posted in In the silence that follows

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Yes, what a great way to end.

Posted on Thu, 13 Mar 2014

Yes, what a great way to end. I thought he was going to be a villain of some kind. Kept me reading, well done.

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Posted in Raza's home visit

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