Starfish Girl

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My stories have been read 234084 times and 44 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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New Brooms

I hate these does. ‘Bonding’ he calls them. ‘Gives us a chance to meet socially and interact.’ He’s full of crap! Look at him, new designer suit,...
Cherry

A Flake of Your Life

A writing class exercise, how music can influence writing! I enjoy Saturday evenings. The end of the week and the chance to try out a new recipe. I...

The Finishing Touch

The mirror was cracked and smeary. Some of the lights around its edge flickered as though trying to send some sort of Morse Code message. Jules...

Revenge, flash fiction

A challenge at my writing class to write flash fiction, take an existing story and cut it to 200 words. Not sure it works, I prefer original. Could I...

Chicks

She watched and was beguiled by the look of complete concentration. A small pink tongue was held captive by a set of perfectly formed teeth and the...

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120 of my comments have received 127 Great Feedback votes

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Yes, what a great way to end.

Posted on Thu, 13 Mar 2014

Yes, what a great way to end. I thought he was going to be a villain of some kind. Kept me reading, well done.

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