Starfish Girl

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I have 84 stories published in 0 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 74646 times and 28 of my stories have been cherry picked.
35 of my 791 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 37 votes

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The Returned

A photograph. It could be anyone. One of hundreds involved in a 'War to end all wars'. Much cracked and faded now, like the memories. He stares...

Third Step Up

Something I started writing a while ago, not finished of course Third Step Up A teddy, old, battered, moth eaten. Abandoned on the third step from...

The Cup That Cheers

My writing class was given the task of writing in the second person. I found it very difficult, not sure if I've managed it. A small ornate table,...
Cherry

Cornucopia

Cornucopia, Cachet, Cadeaux and Collectibles. Have you ever heard anything so pretentious? Especially above a premises selling car boot sale...

To Whinge or not to Whinge, That is the Question

Another writing class exercise, writing as therapy. Not sure if it has helped but I enjoyed writing it! I enjoy cooking and especially trying new...

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35 of my comments have received 37 Great Feedback votes

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A scary piece, and the

Posted on Sun, 15 Jun 2014

A scary piece, and the repetition, and its change intensifies this .

Lindy

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Posted in Look Out

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Cold shivers and goose bumps.

Posted on Wed, 07 May 2014

Cold shivers and goose bumps.

A great social statement of the time. I was born in 1947 and can remember pig bins, washing day, rent man etc.

I was luckier than you, wanted, even by my brother eventually, five years older than me...

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Posted in Women of a Certain Age

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It seems that 'the ones'

Posted on Tue, 01 Apr 2014

It seems that 'the ones' existance did not deserve a name, was just there, until the very last line where dreams can't be stifled.

Quite chilling.

Lindy

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Posted in The One...

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Simple and short but so muche

Posted on Thu, 27 Mar 2014

Simple and short but so muche there.

Lindy

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Posted in In the silence that follows

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Yes, what a great way to end.

Posted on Thu, 13 Mar 2014

Yes, what a great way to end. I thought he was going to be a villain of some kind. Kept me reading, well done.

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Posted in Raza's home visit

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