Starfish Girl
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The Returned
A photograph. It could be anyone. One of hundreds involved in a 'War to end all wars'. Much cracked and faded now, like the memories. He stares...
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Third Step Up
Something I started writing a while ago, not finished of course Third Step Up A teddy, old, battered, moth eaten. Abandoned on the third step from...
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The Cup That Cheers
My writing class was given the task of writing in the second person. I found it very difficult, not sure if I've managed it. A small ornate table,...
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Cornucopia
Cornucopia, Cachet, Cadeaux and Collectibles. Have you ever heard anything so pretentious? Especially above a premises selling car boot sale...
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To Whinge or not to Whinge, That is the Question
Another writing class exercise, writing as therapy. Not sure if it has helped but I enjoyed writing it! I enjoy cooking and especially trying new...
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A scary piece, and the
Posted on Sun, 15 Jun 2014
A scary piece, and the repetition, and its change intensifies this .
Lindy
Read full commentPosted in Look Out
Cold shivers and goose bumps.
Posted on Wed, 07 May 2014
Cold shivers and goose bumps.
A great social statement of the time. I was born in 1947 and can remember pig bins, washing day, rent man etc.
I was luckier than you, wanted, even by my brother eventually, five years older than me...
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It seems that 'the ones'
Posted on Tue, 01 Apr 2014
It seems that 'the ones' existance did not deserve a name, was just there, until the very last line where dreams can't be stifled.
Quite chilling.
Lindy
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Simple and short but so muche
Posted on Thu, 27 Mar 2014
Simple and short but so muche there.
Lindy
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Yes, what a great way to end.
Posted on Thu, 13 Mar 2014
Yes, what a great way to end. I thought he was going to be a villain of some kind. Kept me reading, well done.
Read full commentPosted in Raza's home visit
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