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When they went into the lounge, Danny stopped by the front door and left his boots there. ‘It’s okay,’ Kel said. ‘Don’t worry about it.’ Nash glared...
The hotel was quiet the morning after a butchered corpse had been discreetly removed. It was a contrived coolness with the brittle calm of a cover-up...
I am filled with hatred. And the ache of something I can’t name. I sit alone on my bed, the lamp throwing everything into a weak orange soup. I want...
109 of my comments have received 110 Great Feedback votes
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I enjoyed this. Great writing
Posted on Tue, 08 Aug 2023
I enjoyed this. Great writing and told just as is. I did a stint working to the rigid timescales you described as an interviewer at home. I loved it, but towards the end, had hubby's dad living with us. He had dementia and needed constant care,...
This is what I found on the .GOV website. (I use them for most of my policies and whatnot) it only seems to apply to sex offenders and domestic abuse. But because Max had sex with at least one of the victims, I went with it. I looked at half a...
Thank you, Insert. I'm so glad that you're enjoying it. Do you know, I shot myself right in the foot. This was never meant to be a series, it was just an idea that grew arms and legs on me. If I'd been serious about it, I'd have made him...
Strong, Strong, Strong. My partner's father called him weak for crying at his sister's funeral, the world was different two generations down from today.
We had Mark's dad for the last two years, it was hard, it was hell, and eventually he...
I enjoyed this. Great writing
Posted on Tue, 08 Aug 2023
I enjoyed this. Great writing and told just as is. I did a stint working to the rigid timescales you described as an interviewer at home. I loved it, but towards the end, had hubby's dad living with us. He had dementia and needed constant care,...
Read full commentPosted in There’s a new sick line, for calling in sick apparently! By Alfred Muggins, Call Centre Agent!
This is what I found on the
Posted on Mon, 24 Jul 2023
This is what I found on the .GOV website. (I use them for most of my policies and whatnot) it only seems to apply to sex offenders and domestic abuse. But because Max had sex with at least one of the victims, I went with it. I looked at half a...
Read full commentPosted in Silas Nash Book 1: Hush Hush Honeysuckle: Chapter 19
Yes, I'll edit and tidy it. I
Posted on Mon, 10 Jul 2023
Yes, I'll edit and tidy it. I aimed to cut off at the scene break, but fat fingers must have got in the way :)
Thanks Insert, done.
Read full commentPosted in Silas Nash Book 1: Hush Hush Honeysuckle: Chapter 11 (a)
Thank you, Insert. I'm so
Posted on Fri, 07 Jul 2023
Thank you, Insert. I'm so glad that you're enjoying it. Do you know, I shot myself right in the foot. This was never meant to be a series, it was just an idea that grew arms and legs on me. If I'd been serious about it, I'd have made him...
Read full commentPosted in Silas Nash Book 1: Hush Hush Honeysuckle: Chapter 9 ( b)
A fascinating piece. It's
Posted on Sat, 08 Jul 2023
A fascinating piece. It's great reading about other people's lives,especially when it's something positive like this.
Thank you for the read.
Read full commentPosted in Living The Dream
Great writing. I enjoyed
Posted on Fri, 07 Jul 2023
Great writing. I enjoyed every word of this. :)
Read full commentPosted in Miss Australia 1978 – Part Three of Four
If now was then, how many
Posted on Tue, 04 Jul 2023
If now was then, how many more momentoes would we have of life? Our kids, holidays, days like that?
This is beautiful, and I can't wait to see Cornwall. I've never been and we're going to make it our main holiday next year (Mark's...
Read full commentPosted in It's Too Late For Things Missed
And the plot thickens.
Posted on Fri, 30 Jun 2023
And the plot thickens.
A couple of little typos but nothing that distracts from the story.
I'm getting into the characters now.
thanks for the read.
Read full commentPosted in 8.3 Underthings
Thanks Celt, I'll have
Posted on Wed, 28 Jun 2023
Thanks Celt, I'll have another look at it, appreciated. :)
Peter and I fight over cliches.
Prime example today I wrote, 'Like stealing from an idiot.'
Read full comment'No, Sooz, the term is, 'Like stealing candy from a baby,'
'But you...
Posted in Silas Nash Book 1 Hush Hush Honeysuckle Chapter 3 (b)
Strong, Strong, Strong. My
Posted on Wed, 28 Jun 2023
Strong, Strong, Strong. My partner's father called him weak for crying at his sister's funeral, the world was different two generations down from today.
We had Mark's dad for the last two years, it was hard, it was hell, and eventually he...
Read full commentPosted in The Things Missed
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