Sooz006

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I have 609 stories published in 11 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 562981 times and 376 of my stories have been cherry picked.
74 of my 3,447 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 76 votes

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Silas Nash Book 1: Hush Hush Honjeysuckle: Chapter 24

By Sooz006 on Wed, 09 Aug 2023

Nash had a bad night. Loneliness was always worse when it was dark and he was in the house on his own. It was crippling. Having a selfish,...
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Silas Nash Book 1: Hush Hush Honeysuckle: Chapter 23

By Sooz006 on Wed, 09 Aug 2023

‘I need to speak to Inspector Nash,’ somebody said. ‘He’s very busy, miss, and can’t come to the desk. If you tell me what it’s about, I can give him...
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Silas Nash Book 1: Hush Hush Honeysuckle: Chapter 22

By Sooz006 on Mon, 07 Aug 2023

‘We should talk.’ ‘Of course. Shall I come to you?’ Jessica sounded repulsed. ‘No. Text me your address, please, and I’ll come to you.’ With the...
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Silas Nash Book 1: Hush Hush Honeysuckle. Chapter 21 (b)

By Sooz006 on Fri, 28 Jul 2023

At home, he touched things as though he’d been away for a year. He touched his bookcase in the hall and brushed his hand over some of the books. He’d...
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Silas Nash Book 1: Hush Hush Honeysuckle: Chapter 21 (a)

By Sooz006 on Thu, 27 Jul 2023

‘Go on. Tell me again what you want me to do.’ ‘This man is targeting you. Therefore it stands to reason that you either know him or you’ve had...
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74 of my comments have received 76 Great Feedback votes

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Good morning, Rachel, good to

Posted on Fri, 08 May 2020

Good morning, Rachel, good to see you again.  I love spiddey people, and as long as I can beat the  iguana and the kitten--I am the designated househoold spiddey catcher, savior of all. We have the most vocal cat in history, he's always yelling...

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Posted in Arachne

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What I didn't write is after

Posted on Fri, 01 May 2020

What I didn't write is after that conversaion the first time he got two dining room chairs and did pull ups on them ... no problem, the worst he was going to do was break my chairs.  I had to intervene when he started kicking his legs up....

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Posted in In a World Gone Mad: 1 May 2020 ...1

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Beautiful paranoia.  I was

Posted on Tue, 28 Apr 2020

Beautiful paranoia.  I was going to suggest more para breaks but I like the rambling monologue of it. 

Favourite line: how once it’s fired there’s nothing you can do to stop the bullet getting into you,

 

I would like more of...

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Posted in From Jester To King XC

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Hi Drew. 

Posted on Sun, 26 Apr 2020

Hi Drew. 

I'm left wondering if this is a stand alone or part of a bigger piece? 

Either way good story well handled. I like the way you normalised his double life as though it's the most natural thing in the world. How brilliant to...

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Posted in Transatlantic Nylon

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Hi Phil ... cracking story, I

Posted on Sun, 26 Apr 2020

Hi Phil ... cracking story, I loved thee two, it's brilliant when  2 characters gel perfectly together. One of my favourite writers on this site is Rich and he has the knack of getting humour and character interaction down pat. 

I could...

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Posted in From a distance...

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Hi Ewan, good to read you

Posted on Sun, 26 Apr 2020

Hi Ewan, good to read you again.

How many times did you edit this before posting?  If it's less than five, I'm bowing in awe. It reads as ultra polished. It's clean, honed, sharp and reads beautifully. Is it a stand alone or part of a...

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Posted in 68. Have A Cigar

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Hi Rhiannon, long time no

Posted on Sun, 26 Apr 2020

Hi Rhiannon, long time no read, hope you are well. 

Okay, so I've got to say the subject isn't to my taste, pease don't be offended by that, just each to their own and all that and I've checked all my bones and don't have a religious one...

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Posted in Whatever the mess

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Hi Simon, nice to meet you. I

Posted on Sun, 26 Apr 2020

Hi Simon, nice to meet you. I'm a returner and haven't been in for, ooh, forever.  Am returning to writing and want to review for other people before launching in unabashed with my own scribbles. 

 

Repetition of ' Proud' in a...

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Posted in From Jester To King LXXXVII

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Rivita with butter and

Posted on Sun, 25 Feb 2018

Rivita with butter and Marmalade, Strong coffe and a cracking little story, what a great Sunday morning. 

 

You built the atmosphere of this well.  I like the understated ending ... what the hell had splattered that bottom left?...

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Posted in The Pitsea Loop

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Hello lovely, Good to read

Posted on Sat, 24 Feb 2018

Hello lovely, Good to read you again. 

 

Slight Spoiler!

 

This is a tale not only of two (102) cities but also two halves. It didn't grab me quickly enough and I think you need to revisit the top third. 

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Posted in Traveller

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