Sooz006

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I have 560 stories published in 10 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 365404 times and 335 of my stories have been cherry picked.
59 of my 3,310 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 61 votes

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Break The Child: Epilogue: Through a Father's Eyes

Epilogue: Through a Father’s Eyes I’ve cried a million tears and cried until I thought it would dissolve me. This time I’m crying for a new reason—I...
Cherry

Break the Child: Prologue: In Dad's Own Words

Break the Child Katherine Black Beware of the monsters that dwell in the mind. - Katie Bell Prologue I am a humbled man. My name is Stephen Barnet...

Break the Child: Chapter Thirty-Eight: The End

Chapter Thirty-Nine I know, I haven’t written for ages. I bet you thought I was dead. You try writing with a nine-week-old baby to look after. I...
Cherry

Break the Child: Chapter Thirty-eight: He's Here

Chapter Thirty-Eight Oh, my Goodness, he’s here. My baby brother has been born and he’s the only good thig in my whole entire life, because—you see—...
Cherry

Break the Child: Chapter Thirty-Seven: big White Teeth and Fake Smiles

Chapter Thirty-Seven Janet Denton had big white teeth and she smiled all the time. She had a silver teddy bear broach on the lapel of her jacket...

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59 of my comments have received 61 Great Feedback votes

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Imagine that, a couple so

Posted on Wed, 28 Oct 2015

Imagine that, a couple so perfect they synchronize murder.... love this line. 

 

Can't beat agood old tale of darkness and wierdness. Enjoyed this, welcome. 

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Posted in A Hallowed Evening

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Pretty words, sad yet hopeful

Posted on Thu, 22 Oct 2015

Pretty words, sad yet hopeful. 

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Posted in Blue Eternal

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Harpie doesn't have the power

Posted on Wed, 06 Aug 2014

Harpie doesn't have the power to give cherries, nothing to do with her. ...only the cherry fairy can bestow ;-)

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Posted in Under the Ice (2)

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This reads as very precise

Posted on Tue, 03 Mar 2015

This reads as very precise and old school, as though the poet knows how to be a poet. I enjoyed the mix of passion and nature combined with the elements and a bit of chemistry. Well thought out, well written and well compositioned. Professional...

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Posted in Night's Fleeting Passions Subsumed

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Beautifully melancholy. 

Posted on Tue, 03 Mar 2015

Beautifully melancholy. 

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Posted in Shadows on the Stairs

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It was a stained- glass blue

Posted on Wed, 06 Aug 2014

It was a stained- glass blue today; if I could have tapped it, it would have shattered into a billion million pieces...beautiful

I had cast a cloak of comfort over my family, by casting away the dust. ..your description in this is...

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Posted in Dust

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Plots was offered for sale in

Posted on Fri, 20 Feb 2015

Plots was offered for sale in the market... not sure if this is intentionall re tone of voice but if not...plots were sold. 

 

The first class washeld on the second floor of Taylor's hall, ...was held.

 

These letters...

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Posted in Susannah Woychik's Letters -6 - 1876-7

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    Brooke was definitely the

Posted on Mon, 16 Feb 2015

    Brooke was definitely the most dominate one out of the five of us...dominant.

         During my single-digit years were when I would see a lot of Brooke and Taylor... I see what you're saying here but the sentence couled be...

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Posted in Favorite (part 1)

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And you've done it to me

Posted on Thu, 01 Jan 1970

And you've done it to me again, just geting solidly into it and it stops...but I loved every word. You write with such grace and style. You have a bohemian sophistication that reeks of class even when you're writing down and dirty stuff.

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Posted in Las Vegas 3

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Wow!

Posted on Wed, 07 Jan 2015

Wow!

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Posted in You Are No More...

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