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Nash was behind Norton, and she was closing in on the Harley. Travis turned in his seat. They were right behind Norton on his tail, and for a second...
Nash was wired from a rush of adrenaline. He couldn’t mess up again. He had to get inside Bernstein’s head, be him, and think methodically. The guard...
The wind sweeping through the cemetery was uncommitted, the kind that rustled hems and ribbons but didn’t disturb the dead. Even the weather managed...
Brown ran to catch up to Nash before they went into the briefing. ‘Boss, wait up. I need to talk to you.’ ‘It’ll have to be quick, you’re already two...
109 of my comments have received 110 Great Feedback votes
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The energy of this is great.
Posted on Sat, 04 Jan 2025
The energy of this is great. There's no flounder or 'what now?' it's boom, boom, up, up ... and then, in all the action we have something as mundane and out of place as a lollipop stuck in a light socket, and people still have to eat. I loved...
Wow .... no wonder your therapist remembered this several years later. This poem is beautiful and I love your therapist, how caring and professional he/she must be to retain the work of a patient in their heads for 4 or 5 years. And how bloody...
That sounds like every family dinner at our house. One of Mark's kids always has a grievance about something--and games nights get ridiculously competitive.
The thing that makes this story work so well is the pace ... you turn it at just...
Hi, Maxine ... the joys of technology, eh? This is great, The stress of those conversations. My computer is everything and just the thought of being without it is terrifying ... but that said, my son's never ring me. They know there's no point....
Too many unpeopled people in the world. I'm a passenger assistant for children with extra needs and some of their stories are heartbreaking. The parents often need as much support as the kids The world can be uncaring in current times. But there'...
Beautiful imagery. One of my dogs flatly refused to go out in it. I had to stand outside with him. I love a good storm and don't ever remember being afraid of them as a child. I was terrified of ghosts in my room.
The energy of this is great.
Posted on Sat, 04 Jan 2025
The energy of this is great. There's no flounder or 'what now?' it's boom, boom, up, up ... and then, in all the action we have something as mundane and out of place as a lollipop stuck in a light socket, and people still have to eat. I loved...
Read full commentPosted in Dinner-with 5 eyez (stripped)
Wow .... no wonder your
Posted on Tue, 18 Feb 2025
Wow .... no wonder your therapist remembered this several years later. This poem is beautiful and I love your therapist, how caring and professional he/she must be to retain the work of a patient in their heads for 4 or 5 years. And how bloody...
Read full commentPosted in Cows - lost, refound, tinkered with.
That sounds like every family
Posted on Sat, 08 Feb 2025
That sounds like every family dinner at our house. One of Mark's kids always has a grievance about something--and games nights get ridiculously competitive.
The thing that makes this story work so well is the pace ... you turn it at just...
Read full commentPosted in Paradise found
A great piece, and a great
Posted on Wed, 29 Jan 2025
A great piece, and a great after story about your son having the same tech years ago. Us dinosaurs know nothing. x
Read full commentPosted in Passwords.
Hi, Maxine ... the joys of
Posted on Wed, 29 Jan 2025
Hi, Maxine ... the joys of technology, eh? This is great, The stress of those conversations. My computer is everything and just the thought of being without it is terrifying ... but that said, my son's never ring me. They know there's no point....
Read full commentPosted in Passwords.
This is deep, it's a pity we
Posted on Thu, 30 Jan 2025
This is deep, it's a pity we don't have a recordings section, (Maybe something to look at, Eds? ) I'd like to hear it performed.
Brilliant meter and energy. I like that every sylable was important and not just input for the rhyme. Great...
Read full commentPosted in Alive N‘ 25*
Crikey .... I posted this
Posted on Tue, 28 Jan 2025
Crikey .... I posted this like, five minutes ago .. thank you very, very much for the cherry.
Here I am again, that bad penny that turns up wanting people to read and help while I'm in a slump and feeling horribly guilty for another long...
Read full commentPosted in The Book ..Chapter 1
Too many unpeopled people in
Posted on Tue, 28 Jan 2025
Too many unpeopled people in the world. I'm a passenger assistant for children with extra needs and some of their stories are heartbreaking. The parents often need as much support as the kids The world can be uncaring in current times. But there'...
Read full commentPosted in Anthem
Beautiful imagery. One of my
Posted on Thu, 21 Sep 2023
Beautiful imagery. One of my dogs flatly refused to go out in it. I had to stand outside with him. I love a good storm and don't ever remember being afraid of them as a child. I was terrified of ghosts in my room.
Lovely, Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Tempestuous Stirrings
Beautiful Richard. We live
Posted on Wed, 09 Aug 2023
Beautiful Richard. We live near the beach and every word of this rang true for me. Thank you for the read.
Favourite phrase: Seaweed carpets of wet sand.
Read full commentPosted in Farewell Sunlight's Delight
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