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I have 702 stories published in 11 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1065354 times and 474 of my stories have been cherry picked.
106 of my 3,724 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 106 votes

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Xion Usland Zero: Chapter 31

Nash was behind Norton, and she was closing in on the Harley. Travis turned in his seat. They were right behind Norton on his tail, and for a second...
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Cherry

Xion Island Zero: Chapter 30

Nash was wired from a rush of adrenaline. He couldn’t mess up again. He had to get inside Bernstein’s head, be him, and think methodically. The guard...
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Cherry

Xion Island Zero: Chapter 29

Nash stood under a yew tree and watched the last car pull away from the cemetery. The place felt thick with old ghosts, but Max was nowhere around...
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Xion Island Zero: Chapter 28

The wind sweeping through the cemetery was uncommitted, the kind that rustled hems and ribbons but didn’t disturb the dead. Even the weather managed...
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Cherry

Xion Island Zero, Chapter 27

Brown ran to catch up to Nash before they went into the briefing. ‘Boss, wait up. I need to talk to you.’ ‘It’ll have to be quick, you’re already two...

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106 of my comments have received 106 Great Feedback votes

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That sounds like every family

Posted on Sat, 08 Feb 2025

That sounds like every family dinner at our house. One of Mark's kids always has a grievance about something--and games nights get ridiculously competitive. 

The thing that makes this story work so well is the pace ... you turn it at just...

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Posted in Paradise found

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A great piece, and a great

Posted on Wed, 29 Jan 2025

A great piece, and a great after story about your son having the same tech years ago. Us dinosaurs know nothing. x

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Posted in Passwords.

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Hi, Maxine ... the joys of

Posted on Wed, 29 Jan 2025

Hi, Maxine ... the joys of technology, eh? This is great, The stress of those conversations. My computer is everything and just the thought of being without it is terrifying ... but that said, my son's never ring me. They know there's no point....

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Posted in Passwords.

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This is deep, it's a pity we

Posted on Thu, 30 Jan 2025

This is deep, it's a pity we don't have a recordings section, (Maybe something to look at, Eds? )  I'd like to hear it performed. 

Brilliant meter and energy. I like that every sylable was important and not just input for the rhyme. Great...

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Posted in Alive N‘ 25*

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Crikey .... I posted this

Posted on Tue, 28 Jan 2025

Crikey .... I posted this like, five minutes ago .. thank you very, very much for the cherry. 

Here I am again, that bad penny that turns up wanting people to read and help while I'm in a slump and feeling horribly guilty for another long...

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Posted in The Book ..Chapter 1

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Too many unpeopled people in

Posted on Tue, 28 Jan 2025

Too many unpeopled people in the world. I'm a passenger assistant for children with extra needs and some of their stories are heartbreaking. The parents often need as much support as the kids The world can be uncaring in current times. But there'...

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Posted in Anthem

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Beautiful imagery. One of my

Posted on Thu, 21 Sep 2023

Beautiful imagery. One of my dogs flatly refused to go out in it. I had to stand outside with him. I love a good storm and don't ever remember being afraid of them as a child. I was terrified of ghosts in my room.
 

Lovely, Jenny. 

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Posted in Tempestuous Stirrings

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Beautiful Richard. We live

Posted on Wed, 09 Aug 2023

Beautiful Richard. We live near the beach and every word of this rang true for me. Thank you for the read. 

Favourite phrase: Seaweed carpets of wet sand. 

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Posted in Farewell Sunlight's Delight

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I enjoyed this. Great writing

Posted on Tue, 08 Aug 2023

I enjoyed this. Great writing and told just as is.  I did a stint working to the rigid timescales you described as an interviewer at home. I loved it, but towards the end, had hubby's dad living with us. He had dementia and needed constant care,...

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Posted in There’s a new sick line, for calling in sick apparently! By Alfred Muggins, Call Centre Agent!

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This is what I found on the

Posted on Mon, 24 Jul 2023

This is what I found on the .GOV website. (I use them for most of my policies and whatnot) it only seems to apply to sex offenders and domestic abuse. But because Max had sex with at least one of the victims, I went with it. I looked at half a...

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Posted in Silas Nash Book 1: Hush Hush Honeysuckle: Chapter 19

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