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The Book: Chapter 51

By Sooz006 on Thu, 03 Apr 2025

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The Book: Chapter 51

By Sooz006 on Thu, 03 Apr 2025

Hi. Yes, you, my reader. Don’t be shy. I’m glad you could make it. Let’s not bore each other with names. You’ve read my story. Sad, but true, and let...

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The Book: Chapter 50

By Sooz006 on Thu, 03 Apr 2025

The room was sterile, though Mick had tried to make it homely with a few personal touches, but there’s only so much you can do against the colours he...

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The Book: chapter 49

By Sooz006 on Wed, 02 Apr 2025

The choking stench of burned plastic and scorched wood clung to the hairs at the back of his throat, suffocating him despite the breathing apparatus...

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105 of my comments have received 106 Great Feedback votes

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Morning Drew, all the very

Posted on Sat, 09 May 2020

Morning Drew, all the very best of luck with Falmingo. I wish you every sucess, lovely. somebody has to be The One, and why not you. Look forward to hearing about your sucess.

Now about my booking, do you have a pool?....

Posted in Flamingo Dreams

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Good morning, Rachel, good to

Posted on Fri, 08 May 2020

Good morning, Rachel, good to see you again. I love spiddey people, and as long as I can beat the iguana and the kitten--I am the designated househoold spiddey catcher, savior of all. We have the most vocal cat in history, he's always yelling...

Posted in Arachne

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What I didn't write is after

Posted on Fri, 01 May 2020

What I didn't write is after that conversaion the first time he got two dining room chairs and did pull ups on them ... no problem, the worst he was going to do was break my chairs. I had to intervene when he started kicking his legs up....

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Hi Drew.

Posted on Sun, 26 Apr 2020

Hi Drew.

I'm left wondering if this is a stand alone or part of a bigger piece?

Either way good story well handled. I like the way you normalised his double life as though it's the most natural thing in the world. How brilliant to...

Posted in Transatlantic Nylon

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Hi Phil ... cracking story, I

Posted on Sun, 26 Apr 2020

Hi Phil ... cracking story, I loved thee two, it's brilliant when 2 characters gel perfectly together. One of my favourite writers on this site is Rich and he has the knack of getting humour and character interaction down pat.

I could...

Posted in From a distance...

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Hi Ewan, good to read you

Posted on Sun, 26 Apr 2020

Hi Ewan, good to read you again.

How many times did you edit this before posting? If it's less than five, I'm bowing in awe. It reads as ultra polished. It's clean, honed, sharp and reads beautifully. Is it a stand alone or part of a...

Posted in 68. Have A Cigar

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Hi Rhiannon, long time no

Posted on Sun, 26 Apr 2020

Hi Rhiannon, long time no read, hope you are well.

Okay, so I've got to say the subject isn't to my taste, pease don't be offended by that, just each to their own and all that and I've checked all my bones and don't have a religious one...

Posted in Whatever the mess

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Rivita with butter and

Posted on Sun, 25 Feb 2018

Rivita with butter and Marmalade, Strong coffe and a cracking little story, what a great Sunday morning.

You built the atmosphere of this well. I like the understated ending ... what the hell had splattered that bottom left?...

Posted in The Pitsea Loop

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Hello lovely, Good to read

Posted on Sat, 24 Feb 2018

Hello lovely, Good to read you again.

Slight Spoiler!

This is a tale not only of two (102) cities but also two halves. It didn't grab me quickly enough and I think you need to revisit the top third.

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Posted in Traveller

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A Visit

Posted on Wed, 07 Jun 2017

Forgive me for lurching in after months away and posting...I promise to come back and do some reviewing.