Spring-Shine!


By Rhiannonw
Wed, 12 Mar 2025
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Celandines sparkle when the sun shines:
brightest carpet of the spring.
Daffodils trumpet, loudly sing.
Scattered clumps intensely glow,
dance when the breezes blow.
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you could put this to music, Rhia
I found myself singing along as I read it.
Very cheery!
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So pretty, loving seeing
So pretty, loving seeing spring on my way to work ev3ery day.
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Hurrah for Springtime! It's
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Hurrah for Springtime! It's always wonderful to see, especially when other things aren't so hopeful
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A cornucopia of colour.
A cornucopia of colour.
Spring captured so eloquently in this vignette, Rhiannon.
Gorgeous pics too! :)
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Hi Rhiannon, your poem gives
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Hi Rhiannon, your poem gives that sense of how lovely these beautiful flowers shine, and lets the reader know spring is almost here.
Engaging poem and striking photos too.
Jenny.
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