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2646 of my comments have received 2726 Great Feedback votes

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Fabulous title - and I really

Posted on Thu, 22 Nov 2018

Fabulous title - and I really like the poem. Do you think perhaps that first 'but' might be a bit unnecessary?

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Posted in Poem Written On A Plane Over The Atlantic Attempting To Justify A Life Of Debauchery

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this is developing at just

Posted on Wed, 31 Oct 2018

this is developing at just the right pace - nicely balanced too, between local colour, dialogue and action. So much harder to get right than people think

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A wonderful, reflective piece

Posted on Tue, 13 Nov 2018

A wonderful, reflective piece. I wish you luck finding out about the man in the photograph - please let us know how you get on!

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Posted in The Bells of Hell (IP)

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Like philip says - sometimes

Posted on Mon, 12 Nov 2018

Like philip says - sometimes I find your imagery a bit too cryptic, but this one's spot on. I particularly like the second stanza. Do you definitely mean inferred? (I was just wondering if it mght be an auto correct for infra red which would also...

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Posted in vicarious trauma

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'I added some humour to avoid

Posted on Mon, 12 Nov 2018

'I added some humour to avoid sounding unhinged'  hahahahahaha - not much makes me laugh at 7am. This is a brilliant and very very funny piece. I do hope your nom de plume and membership of this site is absolutely watertight Jane 

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Posted in Autopsy of a Boss

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I really like the way in

Posted on Mon, 12 Nov 2018

I really like the way in which you've gone back and forth in time - it's done very smoothly, also your female is convincing except possibly the tin of beer in the middle of the day (I'm not even sure why tbh, it just sounds a bit male? (I know...

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Ah - the sister in law? I can

Posted on Sat, 10 Nov 2018

Ah - the sister in law? I can see what you mean now!

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Posted in Gift: A Son's Story (Push)

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Have I seen those deer masks

Posted on Tue, 30 Oct 2018

Have I seen those deer masks in another story from you? Is this finally the longer piece I think you mentioned planning a while back? It's brilliant anyway - wonderful description and very believable dialogue, action etc - very filmic, as if you'...

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Posted in Aura (2)

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online dating is a minefield.

Posted on Thu, 08 Nov 2018

online dating is a minefield. Hope you find someone in the end!

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Posted in Tarot

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Welcome back Hades - I'm glad

Posted on Fri, 02 Nov 2018

Welcome back Hades - I'm glad you managed to remember your password in the end. If you need any help with your account, email admin@abctales.com and we will sort things out for you. Looking forward to...

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