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I had to read back at one
Posted on Thu, 21 Jul 2016
I had to read back at one point to work out how many people there were and who was who, but apart from that this is great. The dialogue feels very authentic - really nice to see some prose from you!
One typo - discrete should be discreet
Read full commentPosted in Dogs
looking forward to finding
Posted on Tue, 12 Jul 2016
looking forward to finding out more - Welcome to ABCTales!
Read full commentPosted in Memoirs of a Wanna Be: Intro and Chapter 1
A very original idea and
Posted on Thu, 07 Jul 2016
A very original idea and elevated by the wealth of period detail. Brilliant!
Read full commentPosted in Flowers (Part Two of Two) (IP)
Hi Deerman, welcome to
Posted on Mon, 04 Jul 2016
Hi Deerman, welcome to ABCTales from me too! Just re-title this as part one, and then post the remaining text as part two. Hope that helps!
Read full commentPosted in The Spectator, chapters 1-3
Very nicely done. Fantasy is
Posted on Mon, 27 Jun 2016
Very nicely done. Fantasy is not my thing but you kept my attention. A good balance of description and action.
A couple of suggestions for you:
Feeling the warmth of his hands she smiled and opened her eyes and looked into his. Her...
Read full commentPosted in Goodbye
so strange and touching how a
Posted on Sat, 04 Jun 2016
so strange and touching how a few words can take on such a special significance. Perhaps it's because of the care she's showing for you in saying them?
Read full commentPosted in Drive carefully
This is a wonderful poem
Posted on Mon, 30 May 2016
This is a wonderful poem Lavadis. I've removed the photo pending your reply to my email
Read full commentPosted in Cannibal
There's a lot to cut when you
Posted on Sat, 21 May 2016
There's a lot to cut when you do your next draft - too much waffle, but the voice is very well done - very believable, and this is a brilliant line! Do keep going..
'He is a Smiths playlist away from rock bottom'
Read full commentPosted in Tara (snippet 2)
Part of something bigger? I'd
Posted on Sat, 14 May 2016
Part of something bigger? I'd love to read more of this..
Read full commentPosted in Untitled
Beautifully done. The
Posted on Thu, 12 May 2016
Beautifully done. The repetition works really well. One to read aloud
Read full commentPosted in Delicate
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