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Posted on Thu, 25 Aug 2016
sounds like a perfect reunion. the poetry though, perhaps could do with a rethink. some things you use twice could change... such as eyes, worth... perhaps once, and another word from a Thesaurus might add depth, and give better images...Read full comment
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