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I have 397 stories published in 3 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 182087 times and 11 of my stories have been cherry picked.
33 of my 949 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 31 votes

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Rosalind J. Lee

 

Hi, no complaints recently!  See my work for sale below.

http://www.anglohenge.co.uk

http://www.amazon.co.uk/-/e/B00VRM3B2E?ref_=pe_1805931_64002121

I play Empire. Kred from which I advertise my books, and enjoy the rewards...

i play Township on my kindle, which I find kind of relaxing :)

My stories

My Past... Your Present.

taken from my medium post on... https://medium.com/@rosalind.j.lee/my-part-in-the-holocaust-2ab5e8ebf749 My Part in the Holocaust. It’s hard to...

November

If November ushers in the winter with the ice cold winds, and the dry star crossed skies are innocent… of sin, then why are we so transparent in our...

Dereham Has Discovered Carlott!

This is a social experiment in progress in a nearby town, I've always been interested in social experiments - because when they are done informally - self subscribed too, etc, there is a lovely mix of intergration, and lots of commentaries about their situation in their buying.

Leggings - Second Result.

The second result from this online epic book is that the research on my family - on spinal bifida which I have, and which was resolved for me by...

Leggings - is posted.

on the blog, here. It's the end one, as far as I know... for now. There are some links on it, for you to follow if wished. I wanted to say Thank you...

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33 of my comments have received 31 Great Feedback votes

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claps :)

Posted on Wed, 09 Dec 2015

very nicely done, i thought that quote was down to a boxer...  I stand corrected.

thank you for sharing.

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Posted in This Isn't a Dummy Run...

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very nice...

Posted on Sun, 13 Sep 2015

thank you I enjoyed.

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Posted in Heavy Blow

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bravo!

Posted on Thu, 27 Aug 2015

lovely :)

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Posted in Through fragrant Esplanades

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yes minimal poetry.

Posted on Wed, 26 Aug 2015

Nicely done, reads very well. 

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Posted in Five Days a Week

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loved the first stanza

Posted on Sat, 15 Aug 2015

not sure about the second one.  'Things' too vague. 

also '

As not-quite-water

Seeps out through the water. '    what does this mean?     The end of the poem should be satisfying it should conclude....   this fails to do this...

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Posted in Holes in the bag.

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I fear this falls short

Posted on Fri, 17 Jul 2015

of what it could be.  You need to carefully edit for places where when read aloud it doesn't run right.

things like: 'Did you watch us with your lamp-like eyes'  to 'Did you watch with lamp-like eyes'

which makes it more direct and...

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Posted in Mirror Angels - re-written

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I like this

Posted on Fri, 17 Jul 2015

you need to edit carefully now, and it should be perfect.

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Posted in Upon The Beach

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i write on trains too...

Posted on Fri, 06 Jun 2014

I like your focus in this peice.  it's clear and very sharp.

 

have you seen this?

http://www....

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Posted in Train Journeys

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lol

Posted on Thu, 08 May 2014

I'm concerned about the leggy jumper?   is this a real jumper?  mine only have arms...lol!

plus some of the descriptions of the doggies shortness - a vertical disability -are over emphasised and read a little bit clumsy and I personally...

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Posted in Small Secrets

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I really like the flow that

Posted on Sat, 03 May 2014

I really like the flow that you've put into this paragraph poem.  I do feel however to improve it you should take some time to read it aloud to yourself, then you can hear/feel/see where you can make your poem work much smoother.  You will find...

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Posted in The Happiness is Arriving

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