cliffordben502

Primary tabs

I have 12 stories published in 4 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3055 times and 14 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1 of my 13 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1 vote

cliffordben502's picture

 

My stories

Cherry

Lénorme Mort (short story)

Comedy: boy meet boy, Boy tells boy that sex might kill him. Boy discovers that is his exact fetish. A millenial "love" story
Cherry

Cinderblock Graffiti

A mother recounting her visit to her jailed teenage son - a boy who's done something unthinkable. Second draft - let me know what you think.
Cherry

The Yellow Sweater (revised)

I am standing on the corner of Main and Second streets when I suddenly become self-conscious of my sweater. It’s too tight, and in the strobing light...
Gold cherry
Story of the week
Pick of the Month

Because Of The Color (Short Story)

I am standing on the corner of Main and Second when I suddenly become self-conscious of my sweater.

Pages

1 of my comments has received 1 Great Feedback vote

1 Vote

I'm reading Wildlife by

Posted on Mon, 07 Sep 2020

I'm reading Wildlife by Richard Ford right now and I got a bit of vibes off this from that. It might just be the Montana setting.

Only thing i'd say is I think you could build the character's voice a bit more by using dialogue to express...

Read full comment

Posted in Claudia and the Cut Throat