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"Exotic Illnesses" - third chapter (part 2 of 2)
[Continued from previous entry due to character limit] “I just said you and I had been hanging out, ‘cause I knew he came from your school and would...
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"Exotic Illnesses" - third chapter (part 1 of 2)
Had to split the 3rd chapter due character limit. Let me know your thoughts - is this worth contnuing to novel length, is there enough there in terms of hook and plot, character etc?
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"Exotic Illnesses" Second chapter of novel
TWO The economy of Rosella is almost entirely in the sugar cane crop. My family was always removed from this central economy; my mother, an...
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"Exotic Illnesses" - opening chapter of novel
The introductory chapter to a longer work I'm building. Aiming for a literary but kind of tunny tone, coming-of-age with queer themes.
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"The Big Death" (Short Story)
A comedy. Boy meets boy. Boy has life threatening brain injury. For some reason, this turns boy on. Re-draft of my millenial/gen-z love story.
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I'm reading Wildlife by
Posted on Mon, 07 Sep 2020
I'm reading Wildlife by Richard Ford right now and I got a bit of vibes off this from that. It might just be the Montana setting.
Only thing i'd say is I think you could build the character's voice a bit more by using dialogue to express...
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