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[Continued from previous entry due to character limit] “I just said you and I had been hanging out, ‘cause I knew he came from your school and would...
Had to split the 3rd chapter due character limit. Let me know your thoughts - is this worth contnuing to novel length, is there enough there in terms of hook and plot, character etc?
I'm reading Wildlife by
Posted on Mon, 07 Sep 2020
I'm reading Wildlife by Richard Ford right now and I got a bit of vibes off this from that. It might just be the Montana setting.
Only thing i'd say is I think you could build the character's voice a bit more by using dialogue to express...
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