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I have 12 stories published in
4 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3055 times
and 14 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1 of my 13 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1 vote
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Lénorme Mort (short story)
Comedy: boy meet boy, Boy tells boy that sex might kill him. Boy discovers that is his exact fetish. A millenial "love" story
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- 70 reads
Cinderblock Graffiti
A mother recounting her visit to her jailed teenage son - a boy who's done something unthinkable. Second draft - let me know what you think.
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The Yellow Sweater (revised)
I am standing on the corner of Main and Second streets when I suddenly become self-conscious of my sweater. It’s too tight, and in the strobing light...
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Jessa Remembers Everything (Short Story)
Really rough draft of a short story.
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Because Of The Color (Short Story)
I am standing on the corner of Main and Second when I suddenly become self-conscious of my sweater.
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I'm reading Wildlife by
Posted on Mon, 07 Sep 2020
I'm reading Wildlife by Richard Ford right now and I got a bit of vibes off this from that. It might just be the Montana setting.
Only thing i'd say is I think you could build the character's voice a bit more by using dialogue to express...
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