cliffordben502

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I have 19 stories published in 5 collections on the site.
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"Exotic Illnesses" - third chapter (part 2 of 2)

[Continued from previous entry due to character limit] “I just said you and I had been hanging out, ‘cause I knew he came from your school and would...
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"Exotic Illnesses" - third chapter (part 1 of 2)

Had to split the 3rd chapter due character limit. Let me know your thoughts - is this worth contnuing to novel length, is there enough there in terms of hook and plot, character etc?
Cherry

"Exotic Illnesses" Second chapter of novel

TWO The economy of Rosella is almost entirely in the sugar cane crop. My family was always removed from this central economy; my mother, an...
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"Exotic Illnesses" - opening chapter of novel

The introductory chapter to a longer work I'm building. Aiming for a literary but kind of tunny tone, coming-of-age with queer themes.
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"The Big Death" (Short Story)

A comedy. Boy meets boy. Boy has life threatening brain injury. For some reason, this turns boy on. Re-draft of my millenial/gen-z love story.

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I'm reading Wildlife by

Posted on Mon, 07 Sep 2020

I'm reading Wildlife by Richard Ford right now and I got a bit of vibes off this from that. It might just be the Montana setting.

Only thing i'd say is I think you could build the character's voice a bit more by using dialogue to express...

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