I have 97 stories published in
7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 106412 times and 121 of my stories have been cherry picked.
126 of my 970 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 129 votes
126 of my comments have received 129 Great Feedback votes
captured these moments with
Posted on Wed, 14 Jan 2015
captured these moments with lovely, delicate subtle word combinations...lines like reaching through the drivers door/to conjure up a metallic scraping/until the engine bubbled into life/like a mountain spring bottling these little cameos, as you...Read full comment
Posted in The Mechanic
wow, this is wonderful;
Posted on Sun, 01 Feb 2015
wow, this is wonderful; condensed so much backstory&possibilities&images into such a short piece, just absolutely the right words. that last paragraph is absolutely gorgeous. lovely title too. look forward to following more of your work...Read full comment
Posted in What the sky said
Wow this had a lot of impact.
Posted on Tue, 02 Dec 2014
Wow this had a lot of impact. Clearly a v hard subject but I think it is wonderful as well to be able to convey these things in this way and gain a better and more compassionate understanding through reading and think it over and apply in your...Read full comment
Posted in Breaking Glass
I'm not yet familiar with the
Posted on Fri, 18 Oct 2019
I'm not yet familiar with the preceding chapters, but this was a very imaginative and colourful instalment, with important subjects touched on throughout. Much enjoyedRead full comment
An absorbing and, at points,
Posted on Fri, 04 Oct 2019
An absorbing and, at points, emotional and weighty stream of consciousness, all the more real and effective for its rattle of short sentences, off-set against the background observations and life noise. Very much liked 'the entropy of lives where...Read full comment
Posted in Never trust a writer