Stephen Thom

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I have 136 stories published in 8 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 220120 times and 164 of my stories have been cherry picked.
144 of my 1,169 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 149 votes

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Stephen Thom

Carrbridge/Edinburgh 

Mandolin strummer in a folk-rock band 'Dante' https://www.youtube.com/user/wearedante

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144 of my comments have received 149 Great Feedback votes

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Good work Hilary, clipped

Posted on Tue, 20 Nov 2018

Good work Hilary, clipped along at an engaging pace. I liked some of the touches throughout, 'in his mind he had many demons', and 'she wasn't letting him take control'. The latter was a strong, sudden, chilling sentence. 

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Posted in A Casual Murder

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I don't think I know how to

Posted on Thu, 08 Nov 2018

I don't think I know how to pronounce it haha. I should have called the website Abctales! Made the whole thing a black mirror type story

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Ah that's the second phlegm

Posted on Tue, 06 Nov 2018

Ah that's the second phlegm misspelling i've racked up! Which probably means i've used that word once too many. How much phlegm is necessary for one story? That's what i really hope to learn from this.

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That's interesting. I think I

Posted on Mon, 05 Nov 2018

That's interesting. I think I thought it would be cool for one bit, then I was like wait that doesn't work at all, or make any sense haha

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Posted in Aura (10)

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Absorbing stuff, great energy

Posted on Tue, 13 Nov 2018

Absorbing stuff, great energy and enthusiasm. Gritty and lots of great descriptions throughout. Cane clicking is really effective. Enjoyed.

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Posted in Jack The Being

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I could make the very first

Posted on Thu, 08 Nov 2018

I could make the very first sentence 'a bad cold was going round...'

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Posted in Aura (15)

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Cheers kindly again :) Had a

Posted on Tue, 06 Nov 2018

Cheers kindly again :) Had a first post-diagnostic support appointment yesterday and feeling a bit of an info overload atm, but I'll get stuck into this soon, over the weekend! Am game for the added academic jargon challenge ...

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Posted in Aspie Life

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You've crafted something

Posted on Fri, 02 Nov 2018

You've crafted something pretty and warm and intriguing. Loved 'cool-water gaze', perfect description. I think the tone is really important here and you've got it down, warm inviting prose

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Posted in The Empathy Files. The Angel of Empathy (3)

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Pretty, taut prose, lots of

Posted on Thu, 01 Nov 2018

Pretty, taut prose, lots of nice observational touches... subject suits your style too... always a strong heart/humanity underpinning everything you write I think... 

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Posted in The Empathy Files. The Angel of Empathy (2)

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Very affecting& transportive.

Posted on Thu, 25 Oct 2018

Very affecting& transportive. Beautiful diction and word combinations 'mind's oceanic slew', 'iron squall of sea', 'words slap and slur like breakers against rock'. A real language treat. Felt sad reading it but the 'steadfast against...

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Posted in Out of Season

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