I have 136 stories published in
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152 of my 1,205 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 157 votes
152 of my comments have received 157 Great Feedback votes
Enjoyed, the irrational
Posted on Mon, 26 Nov 2018
Enjoyed, the irrational raging jealousy escalated well, the messages throughout was something different. I wonder how that could be sustained. Wonder also how much someone would keep replying to such messages, jealousy, but I guess folk do tbh....Read full comment
Posted in The lie
Good work Hilary, clipped
Posted on Tue, 20 Nov 2018
Good work Hilary, clipped along at an engaging pace. I liked some of the touches throughout, 'in his mind he had many demons', and 'she wasn't letting him take control'. The latter was a strong, sudden, chilling sentence.Read full comment
Posted in A Casual Murder