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StoryShe Explained mickleinapickle43 days 20 hours ago
StoryThe Journey Back mickleinapickle163 days 20 hours ago
StoryDeparture Gate Justin Tuijl23 months 1 week ago
StoryMaster of the Macabre (Part 2) mark p45 months 2 weeks ago
Storythe in-between places hoalarg175 months 3 weeks ago
StoryEllis In The Arms sean mcnulty159 months 3 weeks ago
StoryPad Life 10: Monstrosities airyfairy291 year 9 months ago
StoryPad Life 12: Summer's Here! airyfairy351 year 9 months ago
StoryMaster of the Macabre ( Part 1) mark p41 year 10 months ago
StoryAtmospheric Impressions skinner_jennifer141 year 11 months ago
StoryThe Man on the Other End of the Phone Ewan131 year 11 months ago
Story"Difficult for Strangers" [Mr Martínez Part 1] Ewan51 year 11 months ago
Story"A Man Needs Favours At Times Like These" [Mr Martínez Two] Ewan11 year 11 months ago
Storyjune 25th, woods after a hot day Di_Hard182 years 1 day ago
StoryAn Unwelcome Return Alexander Moore42 years 1 day ago
StoryThe Efferous Beast Ewan12 years 1 month ago
StoryMan With A Plan skinner_jennifer172 years 2 months ago
StoryBand of One HarryC72 years 2 months ago
StoryBus to Town catherine poarch182 years 3 months ago
StoryI fed the stars into your mouth Mark Heathcote42 years 3 months ago
StorySibelius Lobey (Part 1) airyfairy182 years 4 months ago
StoryMinnesota Fats drew_gummerson192 years 4 months ago
StorySaturday Job (1980) mark p22 years 6 months ago
StoryCoastal Path (3) – birds Rhiannonw202 years 7 months ago
StoryMy Mother And I Agree On Something airyfairy192 years 8 months ago

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143 of my comments have received 148 Great Feedback votes

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Lovely descriptions in this

Posted on Wed, 29 Jul 2020

Lovely descriptions in this part. Street lamps that would never light etc. Clouding the moon for the first time that night is great. Also went down slow, like a bull in the ring. Continues to be intriguing 

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Posted in "Something Called a Burner " Mr Martínez Three

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'echoes cackling in the belly

Posted on Mon, 04 May 2020

'echoes cackling in the belly of dead machines' / 'a thousand distant rooftops trembling'...

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Posted in Canal Walk in Summer

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Very pretty. Beautiful final

Posted on Wed, 14 Feb 2018

Very pretty. Beautiful final line. You have a great natural style, like your writing is completely a part of you

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Posted in Now

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wow, this is wonderful;

Posted on Sun, 01 Feb 2015

wow, this is wonderful; condensed so much backstory&possibilities&images into such a short piece, just absolutely the right words. that last paragraph is absolutely gorgeous. lovely title too. look forward to following more of your work

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Posted in What the sky said

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Wow this had a lot of impact.

Posted on Tue, 02 Dec 2014

Wow this had a lot of impact. Clearly a v hard subject but I think it is wonderful as well to be able to convey these things in this way and gain a better and more compassionate understanding through reading and think it over and apply in your...

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Posted in Breaking Glass

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fantastic story, man. The

Posted on Fri, 07 Aug 2020

fantastic story, man. The prose is beautiful - the descriptions of Ellis breaking down - and the dialogue is brilliant. Really enjoyed reading this 

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Posted in Ellis In The Arms

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Cracking piece, complete

Posted on Fri, 07 Aug 2020

Cracking piece, complete surprise halfway through, reminded me a bit of Murakami. Didn't realise this was part of something longer - will have to check back. Great stuff, man 

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Posted in No Eagles Allowed

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yes I agree with Di, the

Posted on Wed, 12 Aug 2020

yes I agree with Di, the character development, sense of place, and subtle building of mystery draws you in. The first season of true detective did a similar thing and was more rewarding in the long run. Great read again, much enjoying

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Posted in "The Only Honest Answer" Mr Martínez Nine

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'I want to tell you to be

Posted on Sat, 01 Aug 2020

'I want to tell you to be quieter ' feels like a keynote line. Beautiful poem, loved 'electrons in charged contact' and 'triboelectrical', a great talent 

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Posted in Electric Bees

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However you feel is important

Posted on Mon, 03 Aug 2020

However you feel is important, because it's how you feel. All the very best smiley

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Posted in Manual diagnostic

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