Stephen Thom
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| Story | Aura (29) | Stephen Thom | 8 | 4 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Aura (28) | Stephen Thom | 7 | 4 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Aura (27) | Stephen Thom | 10 | 4 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Aura (26) | Stephen Thom | 6 | 4 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Aura (25) | Stephen Thom | 3 | 4 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Aura (24) | Stephen Thom | 5 | 4 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Aura (21) | Stephen Thom | 7 | 4 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Aura (23) | Stephen Thom | 7 | 4 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Aura (22) | Stephen Thom | 12 | 4 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Aura (20) | Stephen Thom | 13 | 4 years 5 months ago |
| Story | A Pack of Camels | hudsonmoon | 9 | 4 years 5 months ago |
| Story | New Beginnings | skinner_jennifer | 16 | 4 years 5 months ago |
| Story | For Bob | Mark Burrow | 11 | 4 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Bone Dry | ice rivers | 1 | 4 years 5 months ago |
| Story | GI Joe and the Johnny Pump | hudsonmoon | 7 | 4 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Hares | onemorething | 8 | 4 years 6 months ago |
| Story | Light Of Samhain | skinner_jennifer | 8 | 4 years 6 months ago |
| Story | Al and the Levecar | jeand | 8 | 4 years 6 months ago |
| Story | Aura (1) | Stephen Thom | 12 | 4 years 6 months ago |
| Story | Neo Demon King, Part 2 | Charioth | 1 | 4 years 6 months ago |
| Story | Daisy and The Chalet Woman (Part Two) | airyfairy | 11 | 4 years 6 months ago |
| Story | Elevation Worship Part Ten. | Maxine Jasmin-Green. | 2 | 4 years 6 months ago |
| Story | Voice Of An Angel | skinner_jennifer | 7 | 4 years 7 months ago |
| Story | Angel 18 (portrait) | celticman | 4 | 4 years 7 months ago |
| Story | Angel 17 (Wotsits) | celticman | 5 | 4 years 7 months ago |
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Pins (4)
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Pins (1)
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Aura (32)
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marvellous, marvellous visual
Posted on Tue, 08 Dec 2015
marvellous, marvellous visual and fantastic, ethereal transportive quality, loved moments/phrases 'skies of the blackest lace', 'trapped behind wires' and 'sadness overwhelmed your wings'. v imaginative, swells to an uplifting ending
Read full commentPosted in Free (Poetry monthly)
wow this is a sensory treat..
Posted on Tue, 08 Dec 2015
wow this is a sensory treat... you must become very attuned to sound, naturally, over time... seems v effortless - here at the start there is the sharp 'k' sound 'ivory-musk drifting in the fickleness /of a dally-day dusk', & also the d...
Read full commentPosted in On Preparing a Fruit Salad
good work, enjoyed this, felt
Posted on Tue, 08 Dec 2015
good work, enjoyed this, felt like being pulled around on an epic journey. interesting sweep of thoughts, too, liked lines like 'In non-existing colour/In non-existing time'
Read full commentPosted in Infinity
great work! very entrancing,
Posted on Thu, 03 Dec 2015
great work! very entrancing, repetition worked fantastically.
Read full commentPosted in look away ..... .... ... .. . . . . . ."Poetry Monthly"
thought this was really
Posted on Wed, 14 Oct 2015
thought this was really pretty. transferring these thoughts onto clothing works well, kinda liked the 'f' sounds in the 2nd stanza (fibres, fall, fragrance) and the 's' sounds in the last (senses, salty, spicy, essence), tied in well with the...
Read full commentPosted in There you are
like how adaptable you are...
Posted on Sun, 11 Oct 2015
like how adaptable you are... keep pushing the envelope... can see the constants of great use of sound and sense again... really liked the sun: 'I can almost hear it vibrating'; the swishing and lingering, coils and cracks in this stranger...
Read full commentPosted in My Problem with Peyote
hey! this is wonderful work.
Posted on Mon, 24 Aug 2015
hey! this is wonderful work. you certainly achieved a feeling of momentum in it, pacing along on the rolling commas and 'y' sounds. i liked the way the commas increased at the end, framing 2/3/4 word bursts, as if in a sprint finish, whilst the...
Read full commentPosted in running in the rain
good work, gothic atmosphere
Posted on Mon, 17 Aug 2015
good work, gothic atmosphere twisted up right at the end. nice stylised descriptions&lovely moments scattered throughout - 'playing pitter patter in the back of her tired mind' later, and 'waves of sadness crashed up on the shore'...
Read full commentPosted in Weeping Willow
effective piece... projects a
Posted on Thu, 13 Aug 2015
effective piece... projects a level of feeling well... some lovely poetic prose moments weaved in eg. 'until my remaining days became remaining hours.'/'glow of the moon gently wash over my skin' i agree with the above comment re: metaphors, the...
Read full commentPosted in Soft Men Don't Stay
v lovely, liked the
Posted on Tue, 18 Aug 2015
v lovely, liked the repetitions of 'and then'- changing finally to 'but then'- and 'the key of evening/curtly tuning/the calcified stone.' is a beautiful moment. wonderful level of feeling. :-)
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