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Cherry

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By Stephen Thom on Fri, 03 Jul 2020

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By Stephen Thom on Mon, 29 Jun 2020

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By Stephen Thom on Mon, 29 Jun 2020

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By Stephen Thom on Tue, 18 Dec 2018

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133 of my comments have received 136 Great Feedback votes

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this all came together really

Posted on Sun, 28 Jun 2015

this all came together really well! liked the spark to try something and the execution. think your writing always feel v vivid and alive - lots of little attentive details 'crumples limply in my mouth.' from part 1, use of sound throughout - `...

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Posted in Cravings (Two)

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very transportive and pretty.

Posted on Tue, 23 Jun 2015

very transportive and pretty. lovely diction&alliteration rolls well, accentuates the feel. liked the sudden 'his', too, ' his half crescent smile'. don't know much about form and found the info interesting. very much enjoyed :-)

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Posted in While you were sleeping

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yeah this is really beautiful

Posted on Thu, 25 Jun 2015

yeah this is really beautiful and intricately put together...subtle attention to detail everywhere... from the initial c rattle of 'clambering, climbing – /craving', 'delicately', 'trembles' and 'quiver' dropped throughout, but it was these two...

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Posted in June...

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lovely diction and expression

Posted on Thu, 25 Jun 2015

lovely diction and expression. this is beautifully written. i liked 'turn on/the smoothest hinge' early on, and the tangled cluster of - later. the use of 'snapping' in the final line is brilliant too. dark thoughts, but wonderful expression...

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Posted in Cripple's Catharsis

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ah this is fantastic! but ah,

Posted on Thu, 25 Jun 2015

ah this is fantastic! but ah, I don't have the necessary diction to describe how it read - think vera says it best with 'high-brow and quick-speaking'! think there was layers within layers here but it's the rattle of diction and interest that...

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Posted in Flight of the Bumblebee

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v lovely, lovely diction

Posted on Sat, 20 Jun 2015

v lovely, lovely diction throughout (tatted was new for me) loved  'the one who listens
for a question' and the line it led to. lots of thought and beautiful depth but the moments are always there...think celticman has touched on this with...

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Posted in Lace Wings

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very sad and even seems to

Posted on Sat, 13 Jun 2015

very sad and even seems to move with a certain ominous pace such things must be written about and it is painted with beautiful strokes 'lay howling /on a laundered sheet' / 'I'll have shed/my fat and will look eagerly/round corners'. very lovely...

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Posted in Growing wings

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hi eb some beautiful diction

Posted on Sat, 13 Jun 2015

hi eb some beautiful diction&lovely word combinations and the stanza beginning 'I thought I sensed breath on my neck', leading to ending, was so close and vivid and full of regret. v neat and pretty but quietly devastating. v much enjoyed.

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Posted in Absence

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firstly, this is a lovely

Posted on Wed, 10 Jun 2015

firstly, this is a lovely title... there's a level of angst but it's the thread of thoughts and images conveyed with such economy of words - the truly wonderful 'A beautiful profile, opened/and closed its flickering lids as it passed away' that...

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Posted in All As I Watched

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this is a wonder, l.w... i

Posted on Sun, 07 Jun 2015

this is a wonder, l.w... i think the level of detachment (if that makes any sense) is ultimately all the more expressive - the lists of observations - in conveying a level of feeling and a balance between different places/points in journeys

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