Stephen Thom
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Type | Title | Author | Replies | Last updated |
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Story | Plans | rosaliekempthorne | 2 | 3 years 10 months ago |
Story | Charlie and Eliza (Pt 1) | _Hayley_ | 5 | 3 years 10 months ago |
Story | Charlie and Eliza (Pt 2) | _Hayley_ | 2 | 3 years 10 months ago |
Story | Sixty Minutes in Summer | Ed Crane | 15 | 3 years 10 months ago |
Story | Tour de Falkirk | celticman | 5 | 3 years 10 months ago |
Story | Open-air theatre | Parson Thru | 8 | 3 years 10 months ago |
Story | Quarantine | samhennig | 8 | 3 years 10 months ago |
Story | "LET ME COLLECT DUST" (Part 2 of 2) | Lille Dante | 2 | 3 years 10 months ago |
Story | "LET ME COLLECT DUST" (Part 1 of 2) | Lille Dante | 2 | 3 years 10 months ago |
Story | Black Forest | agnosticnun | 12 | 3 years 10 months ago |
Story | the old geezer | celticman | 14 | 3 years 11 months ago |
Story | Doll | airyfairy | 16 | 3 years 11 months ago |
Story | Money For The Circus 9 | Ewan | 3 | 3 years 11 months ago |
Story | Twisted Time | Penny4athought | 7 | 3 years 11 months ago |
Story | Apple-pie Order | glennvn | 4 | 3 years 11 months ago |
Story | Starfish to Flint | littleditty | 10 | 3 years 11 months ago |
Story | What broke? | socialeaf | 2 | 3 years 11 months ago |
Story | English rain | littleditty | 14 | 3 years 11 months ago |
Story | Home, with family, with scars. | agnosticnun | 14 | 3 years 11 months ago |
Story | Crooked Timber | Ewan | 6 | 3 years 11 months ago |
Story | Dunking Ink (10) | windrose | 1 | 3 years 11 months ago |
Story | The Pictures Are Open | sean mcnulty | 10 | 3 years 11 months ago |
Story | Canal Walk in Summer | John Thornfield | 8 | 3 years 11 months ago |
Story | Thicker than water | Yutka | 4 | 3 years 11 months ago |
Story | Chadpocalypse - 2:9 Ballroom Blitz | mac_ashton | 3 | 3 years 12 months ago |
A tough read, well-written.
Posted on Mon, 29 Oct 2018
A tough read, well-written. Little observational touches helped draw me in (pills in dosette box etc) and the thought processes and dialogue were really effective and affecting in their own way. Good work
Read full commentPosted in A Weekend with Family
'I will always identify that
Posted on Fri, 27 Jul 2018
'I will always identify that those were the good days' beautiful words, beautiful piece
Read full commentPosted in The Chair
Very affecting and honest.
Posted on Sun, 29 Jul 2018
Very affecting and honest. Tidy writing throughout too, you put yourself into it and it carries over to the reader. Lovely piece
Read full commentPosted in Those Moments
Nicely done. Something
Posted on Wed, 14 Feb 2018
Nicely done. Something different. Alliteration and sound and feeling. Like the word combinations - murmur curdles / rush chasmed / susurrus spray. Like this willingness to play with and create new images and ways of presenting words, it's brave...
Read full commentPosted in Chutes of Spring
There's some brilliant
Posted on Thu, 15 Feb 2018
There's some brilliant options. 'by ginger.' 'Dang my melt'
Read full commentPosted in Pins (1)
Interesting piece. It's all
Posted on Tue, 23 Jan 2018
Interesting piece. It's all relative, experience of life, and it feels a joyous, pretty moment. The title feels well chosen, in that way that there is often explaining. I may be reading it wrong - it's late. Much enjoyed though, good work
Read full commentPosted in She Explained
Nice images, nice
Posted on Wed, 17 Jan 2018
Nice images, nice alliterative touches, nice compound words. 'A dot of momentum - ' is a pretty close. Enjoyed.
Read full commentPosted in Snowflakes
Real strong work. Thoughtful,
Posted on Tue, 02 Jan 2018
Real strong work. Thoughtful, touching, entertaining and funny too. Nice tone/ way of relating this to the reader, too... natural. Props, much enjoyed.
Read full commentPosted in The Journey Back
might have to add that wee
Posted on Fri, 13 Oct 2017
might have to add that wee joke into the story...
Read full commentPosted in Happiness is a molecule (1)
Ah 'ferns like dinosaur kits'
Posted on Sun, 17 Sep 2017
Ah 'ferns like dinosaur kits' is GENIUS... so much to appreciate here, 'shadow-silt nestled', rattle of pretty alliteration in 'emerald mosses' myriad mound', little touches like 'bright grass-mass' you can see how much craft and thought has gone...
Read full commentPosted in time travelling
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