Stephen Thom
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Story | Sixty Minutes in Summer | Ed Crane | 15 | 5 years 2 weeks ago |
Story | Tour de Falkirk | celticman | 5 | 5 years 3 weeks ago |
Story | Open-air theatre | Parson Thru | 8 | 5 years 3 weeks ago |
Story | Quarantine | samhennig | 8 | 5 years 3 weeks ago |
Story | "LET ME COLLECT DUST" (Part 1 of 2) | Lille Dante | 2 | 5 years 3 weeks ago |
Story | Black Forest | agnosticnun | 12 | 5 years 3 weeks ago |
Story | the old geezer | celticman | 13 | 5 years 4 weeks ago |
Story | Doll | airyfairy | 16 | 5 years 1 month ago |
Story | Money For The Circus 9 | Ewan | 3 | 5 years 1 month ago |
Story | Twisted Time | Penny4athought | 7 | 5 years 1 month ago |
Story | Apple-pie Order | glennvn | 4 | 5 years 1 month ago |
Story | Starfish to Flint | littleditty | 10 | 5 years 1 month ago |
Story | What broke? | socialeaf | 2 | 5 years 1 month ago |
Story | English rain | littleditty | 14 | 5 years 1 month ago |
Story | Home, with family, with scars. | agnosticnun | 14 | 5 years 1 month ago |
Story | Crooked Timber | Ewan | 6 | 5 years 1 month ago |
Story | Dunking Ink (10) | windrose | 1 | 5 years 1 month ago |
Story | The Pictures Are Open | sean mcnulty | 10 | 5 years 1 month ago |
Story | Canal Walk in Summer | John Thornfield | 8 | 5 years 1 month ago |
Story | Thicker than water | Yutka | 4 | 5 years 1 month ago |
Story | Chadpocalypse - 2:9 Ballroom Blitz | mac_ashton | 3 | 5 years 1 month ago |
Story | Chadpocalypse - 2:7 - Stairway to Heaven | mac_ashton | 3 | 5 years 2 months ago |
Story | A Glass Winter 2 | M T M | 1 | 5 years 2 months ago |
Story | Neo Demon King, Part 1 | Charioth | 1 | 5 years 3 months ago |
Story | New Year's Eve 1966 | hudsonmoon | 12 | 5 years 5 months ago |
Very affecting and honest.
Posted on Sun, 29 Jul 2018
Very affecting and honest. Tidy writing throughout too, you put yourself into it and it carries over to the reader. Lovely piece
Read full commentPosted in Those Moments
Nicely done. Something
Posted on Wed, 14 Feb 2018
Nicely done. Something different. Alliteration and sound and feeling. Like the word combinations - murmur curdles / rush chasmed / susurrus spray. Like this willingness to play with and create new images and ways of presenting words, it's brave...
Read full commentPosted in Chutes of Spring
There's some brilliant
Posted on Thu, 15 Feb 2018
There's some brilliant options. 'by ginger.' 'Dang my melt'
Read full commentPosted in Pins (1)
Nice images, nice
Posted on Wed, 17 Jan 2018
Nice images, nice alliterative touches, nice compound words. 'A dot of momentum - ' is a pretty close. Enjoyed.
Read full commentPosted in Snowflakes
might have to add that wee
Posted on Fri, 13 Oct 2017
might have to add that wee joke into the story...
Read full commentPosted in Happiness is a molecule (1)
Ah 'ferns like dinosaur kits'
Posted on Sun, 17 Sep 2017
Ah 'ferns like dinosaur kits' is GENIUS... so much to appreciate here, 'shadow-silt nestled', rattle of pretty alliteration in 'emerald mosses' myriad mound', little touches like 'bright grass-mass' you can see how much craft and thought has gone...
Read full commentPosted in time travelling
Lovely controlled prose, nice
Posted on Sat, 15 Jul 2017
Lovely controlled prose, nice descriptions and diction esp. verbs throughout
Read full commentPosted in The Day
Sharp prose, vivid dialogue
Posted on Sun, 26 Mar 2017
Sharp prose, vivid dialogue and a sweet story. Liked the attention to detail /touches throughout, key workers, beanie hats, fingerless gloves, pulled me in. Great work!
Read full commentPosted in Anne and Martin
Very tender and a hit on the
Posted on Mon, 22 Aug 2016
Very tender and a hit on the senses - economical but clinical word choice throughout - dry, looping, yellowing, scrambling... 'Your shoes still turn inwards - ' is beautiful observation projected.
Read full commentPosted in The Return
Good work, very effective.
Posted on Thu, 18 Aug 2016
Good work, very effective. You describe these feelings and events with empathy and great attention to detail and it translates in the reading... liked the anthropomorphic shadow too, worked well.
Read full commentPosted in Eighteen part one
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