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143 of my comments have received 148 Great Feedback votes

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A tough read, well-written.

Posted on Mon, 29 Oct 2018

A tough read, well-written. Little observational touches helped draw me in (pills in dosette box etc) and the thought processes and dialogue were really effective and affecting in their own way. Good work

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Posted in A Weekend with Family

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'I will always identify that

Posted on Fri, 27 Jul 2018

'I will always identify that those were the good days' beautiful words, beautiful piece

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Posted in The Chair

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Very affecting and honest.

Posted on Sun, 29 Jul 2018

Very affecting and honest. Tidy writing throughout too, you put yourself into it and it carries over to the reader. Lovely piece

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Posted in Those Moments

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Nicely done. Something

Posted on Wed, 14 Feb 2018

Nicely done. Something different. Alliteration and sound and feeling. Like the word combinations - murmur curdles / rush chasmed / susurrus spray. Like this willingness to play with and create new images and ways of presenting words, it's brave...

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Posted in Chutes of Spring

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There's some brilliant

Posted on Thu, 15 Feb 2018

There's some brilliant options. 'by ginger.' 'Dang my melt' laugh

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Posted in Pins (1)

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Interesting piece. It's all

Posted on Tue, 23 Jan 2018

Interesting piece. It's all relative, experience of life, and it feels a joyous, pretty moment. The title feels well chosen, in that way that there is often explaining. I may be reading it wrong - it's late. Much enjoyed though, good work

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Posted in She Explained

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Nice images, nice

Posted on Wed, 17 Jan 2018

Nice images, nice alliterative touches, nice compound words. 'A dot of momentum - ' is a pretty close. Enjoyed.

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Posted in Snowflakes

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Real strong work. Thoughtful,

Posted on Tue, 02 Jan 2018

Real strong work. Thoughtful, touching, entertaining and funny too. Nice tone/ way of relating this to the reader, too... natural. Props, much enjoyed. 

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Posted in The Journey Back

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might have to add that wee

Posted on Fri, 13 Oct 2017

might have to add that wee joke into the story...

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Posted in Happiness is a molecule (1)

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Ah 'ferns like dinosaur kits'

Posted on Sun, 17 Sep 2017

Ah 'ferns like dinosaur kits' is GENIUS... so much to appreciate here, 'shadow-silt nestled', rattle of pretty alliteration in 'emerald mosses' myriad mound', little touches like 'bright grass-mass' you can see how much craft and thought has gone...

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Posted in time travelling

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