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Thanks everyone. I'm always
Posted on Thu, 06 Jul 2017
Thanks everyone. I'm always amazed and very grateful when someone says something nice about something that I can't seem to help doing.
Maybe something to share: I've recently written three pieces / poetry (?) that readers and writers on...Read full comment
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Hi fictiontoescape. I've been
Posted on Sun, 25 Jun 2017
Hi fictiontoescape. I've been having a read through some of your posts. It's an epic story and your prose has the feel of having been written by a natural storyteller.
I have a couple of thoughts if you'd like them.
Reading stories...Read full comment
Warts an' all rendition. I
Posted on Fri, 11 Aug 2017
Warts an' all rendition. I love the fact you keep this human and individual, because that's where it's at.
Contradictorally (no squiggly red line!) my mind jumped straight to structures: the before and after. Trying to rationally manage and...
This is great. Epic and so
Posted on Mon, 31 Jul 2017
This is great. Epic and so much humanity. It might have been written by H.G. Wells. If there's one thought it leaves as far as the aesthetic goes, having established a meter, it might be worth looking at the penultimate stanza again to see if the...Read full comment