79 of my comments have received 84 Great Feedback votes
Thanks everyone. I'm always
Posted on Thu, 06 Jul 2017
Thanks everyone. I'm always amazed and very grateful when someone says something nice about something that I can't seem to help doing.
Maybe something to share: I've recently written three pieces / poetry (?) that readers and writers on...Read full comment
Posted in Tail-end
Hi fictiontoescape. I've been
Posted on Sun, 25 Jun 2017
Hi fictiontoescape. I've been having a read through some of your posts. It's an epic story and your prose has the feel of having been written by a natural storyteller.
I have a couple of thoughts if you'd like them.
Reading stories...Read full comment
Very gentle and thoughtful
Posted on Thu, 16 Nov 2017
Very gentle and thoughtful piece, PoppyS. Question poems like this always remind me of a kind of Irish talking blues by singer Ronnie Drew. Wonderful. The final lines leave lingering thoughts. I like it.Read full comment
Posted in Paper Gymnasts
Just found time to sit down
Posted on Sun, 12 Nov 2017
Just found time to sit down and read this, maisie.
I like the idea of it being spoken by a veteran. And I like the fact that it avoids the cliché and talks about broken promises and waste. It makes the point nicely.Read full comment
Posted in Civic Duty
A touching and nicely written
Posted on Sun, 22 Oct 2017
A touching and nicely written piece, Biggus. Not merely sentimental. It conveys real human warmth.Read full comment
Lovely link between oil,
Posted on Tue, 14 May 2013
Lovely link between oil, water and paint. My dad used to spend cold nights under his cars, self-taught and following Haynes manuals under a lead-lamp in the middle of winter. I followed him that far, but no further. My poor son, denied contact,...Read full comment
Posted in Viscosity