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I have 942 stories published in 11 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 307939 times and 257 of my stories have been cherry picked.
56 of my 3,296 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 60 votes

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56 of my comments have received 60 Great Feedback votes

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Hi fictiontoescape. I've been

Posted on Sun, 25 Jun 2017

Hi fictiontoescape. I've been having a read through some of your posts. It's an epic story and your prose has the feel of having been written by a natural storyteller.
I have a couple of thoughts if you'd like them.

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Posted in Insignia Chapter 9: Amassing an Army Part 1

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It follows the Block School

Posted on Thu, 21 May 2015

It follows the Block School of repetitive poetry, Philip. Founded on Temple Meads station at around 23:30 last night. I'm hoping the Culture Secretary will request that a plaque be installed.

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Posted in Temple of despair

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The link between the tender

Posted on Tue, 03 Mar 2015

The link between the tender realism of your description of the baby and that of your reverie are the key for me. A beautifully captured moment alone with the moon.

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Posted in Eight Weeks

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Oh, Penny4athought, I so

Posted on Sat, 03 Jun 2017

Oh, Penny4athought, I so dearly hope so. Let's keep trying to spread the love. Great piece. Delicate treatment of a dreadful topic. Well done.

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Posted in Hearts Connect Us

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Very subtle. Very neat. My

Posted on Fri, 26 May 2017

Very subtle. Very neat. My head's spinning, but in an enjoyable way. Should the second "what the hell" be a grape, or did I miss a turning?

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Posted in Elvis, Poker Chips and Grapes

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This story of your father's

Posted on Mon, 01 May 2017

This story of your father's is one of those priceless reminders of a time and a mentality that we know we must never return to, but sometimes forget.

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Posted in Shlamek

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The ever-changing sea. Nice

Posted on Wed, 26 Apr 2017

The ever-changing sea. Nice contrast, Rhiannon.

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Posted in Ocean

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Really enjoyed reading this,

Posted on Sat, 22 Apr 2017

Really enjoyed reading this, penny4athought. A few (3 I think) small typos, but a really nice read. Well written and believable scenes. Final para: know;4th from last: turn; towards the end of the first section: Victoria she. You really made me...

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Posted in "Past or Present" Chapter 6

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Wow. Stops time. The

Posted on Fri, 31 Mar 2017

Wow. Stops time. The intricacy and detail of this is incredible and the writing crystal clear. Very lucid.

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Posted in Smarter than a Caterpillar (Fire Flys and Spiders part two)

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Interesting point. Britain

Posted on Thu, 30 Mar 2017

Interesting point. Britain doesn’t help in this either. There's been an obsession with Russian expansionism since Tsarist times, and greatly exacerbated during and after the Bolshevic revolution to the extent that Britain became militarily...

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Posted in Statement: Russia

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