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I have 986 stories published in 11 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 333886 times and 288 of my stories have been cherry picked.
75 of my 3,550 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 80 votes

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New notebook

Whenever you’re thinking it’s all gone wrong And you don’t know why you’re doing it anymore Call into your favourite place Chat with the waiters Ask...
Cherry

Boatman's dream 34

A drive across the Levels
Cherry

Castellana

Momentito
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Cherry

Lozano, the fishing boat and the nun

There were three of us: the skipper, me and one other

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75 of my comments have received 80 Great Feedback votes

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Hi Philip. I'm catching up. I

Posted on Sun, 04 Jan 2015

Hi Philip. I'm catching up. I like this (keep up, Corporal Jones). Planners like to have their set-pieces, but the oldest cities show exactly this, as do those that follow the laissez-faire organic approach to economic life. London being a prime...

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Posted in The City Lives

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I like the repetition and the

Posted on Wed, 07 Jan 2015

I like the repetition and the flipping around of words. It feels like an eel twisting and coiling to free itself of its captor. I used to draw all the time when I was small. My writing is completely unstructured and that probably limits me, but I...

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Posted in The Discovered Unartist

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What an amazing piece,

Posted on Thu, 01 Jan 2015

What an amazing piece, Shannan. Beautifully detailed. You bring those characters into a truly ordinary world in a delightful way.

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Posted in Session 4 - Being Married Perspective

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I'd say you're a beautiful

Posted on Thu, 18 Dec 2014

I'd say you're a beautiful person Shannan. Maybe it's what people do with the term "God". Whatever, religion has ruined too many lives. Stay happy.

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Posted in Broken Faith

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Works both (all) ways. I

Posted on Sat, 01 Nov 2014

Works both (all) ways. I sometimes think the whole universe fits in one skull, but I think it really exists in them all. Thank God for books / stories / ABCtales.

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Posted in Ghost Hunting in New England

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I really like this VWR. So

Posted on Mon, 13 Oct 2014

I really like this VWR. So heartfelt and full of humanity. It connects in a direct way. Thank you for sharing.

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Posted in RainyMondayafternoonthoughts

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Hi Tina. Thank you. It's me

Posted on Fri, 10 Oct 2014

Hi Tina. Thank you. It's me who's being inspired. Thanks for all the lovely comments. You're right about going with the flow. And every mountain counts - whether physical or metaphorical. x

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Posted in Reflection

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Hi Bee. Can hear the water

Posted on Tue, 07 Oct 2014

Hi Bee. Can hear the water lapping against the hull.

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Posted in Bed is a Boat

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I like this vision of a dark

Posted on Sun, 05 Oct 2014

I like this vision of a dark place. When I read out loud it feels more fluid without the "I commit" and the second "again" in the last line. Nice piece. Like it.

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Posted in just drinks

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Nice portrait of natural

Posted on Mon, 06 Oct 2014

Nice portrait of natural weaknesses, Tina. So much harder to take the alternative path. Harder still to speak up. Will think of this poem today.

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Posted in Sweet Charity

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