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The art of keeping going

Thursday 14 June 2018. Could be worse (14 June 1918, Northern France).
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Vamos España

Evening. There’s heat in the sun as it banks across the square. They said it wouldn’t be long. Things all fall into place. No row of bells or...

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156 of my comments have received 163 Great Feedback votes

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Heard about your dad, too,

Posted on Mon, 01 May 2017

Heard about your dad, too, Elsie. Lots of love. Xxx

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Posted in Shlamek

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This is great. Epic and so

Posted on Mon, 31 Jul 2017

This is great. Epic and so much humanity. It might have been written by H.G. Wells. If there's one thought it leaves as far as the aesthetic goes, having established a meter, it might be worth looking at the penultimate stanza again to see if the...

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Posted in The Melancholy Ballad of the Clockwork Soldier

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An enjoyable piece of

Posted on Mon, 31 Jul 2017

An enjoyable piece of reflective writing, PoppyS.

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Posted in Timeline

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Yes, that last bit. Dougie

Posted on Fri, 21 Jul 2017

Yes, that last bit. Dougie seems to be driving the Volvo at one point.

Good break. We know what happened. Better than telling or showing.

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Posted in Grimms82

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Second para: "Sorry to

Posted on Thu, 20 Jul 2017

Second para: "Sorry to interrupt" says Dougie. Del?

It's on the boil.

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Posted in Grimms81

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Not going to end well.

Posted on Wed, 19 Jul 2017

Not going to end well.

There's a repeated phrase:"on the work surface".

Continuity: "Stabs out his cigarette then lights another with the lit end."

Jaz is in a spot of bother.

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Posted in Grimms 80

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I'm with you on this, but

Posted on Sun, 23 Jul 2017

I'm with you on this, but those people are clever. Don't want to upgrade your phone? We'll give it a battery that dies within 2 years. Think you can change the battery? Think again. It's now part of the phone. You've agitated me. Nice work.

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Posted in I’m not upgrading

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Is that you? Brilliant!

Posted on Sat, 15 Jul 2017

Is that you? Brilliant!

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Posted in The Sweet Heart Of Sugarland

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Wonderful.

Posted on Sat, 15 Jul 2017

Wonderful.

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Posted in The Sweet Heart Of Sugarland

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So much feeling in so few

Posted on Mon, 10 Jul 2017

So much feeling in so few words. Lovely.

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Posted in Sentio Ergo Sum

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