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Sundowner
From the _ing verb
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A June afternoon
That's it. Back to the reading. Thanks.
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Crashing the car - again
For what it's worth
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Exposed roots
A life beyond one's ken
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Paints a surreal picture.
Posted on Fri, 01 Sep 2017
Paints a surreal picture.
Read full commentPosted in Dry Wood
Lovely, sean mcnulty. A
Posted on Sat, 12 Aug 2017
Lovely, sean mcnulty. A sense of everything slipping through your fingers. Hovers nicely between thoughts and things. I love how you zoom/focus in on the man for a moment then move straight on with your stream of thought. Felt like I was...
Read full commentPosted in The Treetops
Flip-side. :)
Posted on Fri, 04 Aug 2017
Flip-side. :)
Read full commentPosted in What poetry is
Warts an' all rendition. I
Posted on Fri, 11 Aug 2017
Warts an' all rendition. I love the fact you keep this human and individual, because that's where it's at.
Read full commentContradictorally (no squiggly red line!) my mind jumped straight to structures: the before and after. Trying to rationally manage and...
Posted in 2002-05 My memories of working at a hostel for homeless men
Heard about your dad, too,
Posted on Mon, 01 May 2017
Heard about your dad, too, Elsie. Lots of love. Xxx
Read full commentPosted in Shlamek
This is great. Epic and so
Posted on Mon, 31 Jul 2017
This is great. Epic and so much humanity. It might have been written by H.G. Wells. If there's one thought it leaves as far as the aesthetic goes, having established a meter, it might be worth looking at the penultimate stanza again to see if the...
Read full commentPosted in The Melancholy Ballad of the Clockwork Soldier
An enjoyable piece of
Posted on Mon, 31 Jul 2017
An enjoyable piece of reflective writing, PoppyS.
Read full commentPosted in Timeline
Yes, that last bit. Dougie
Posted on Fri, 21 Jul 2017
Yes, that last bit. Dougie seems to be driving the Volvo at one point.
Good break. We know what happened. Better than telling or showing.
Read full commentPosted in Grimms82
Second para: "Sorry to
Posted on Thu, 20 Jul 2017
Second para: "Sorry to interrupt" says Dougie. Del?
It's on the boil.
Read full commentPosted in Grimms81
Not going to end well.
Posted on Wed, 19 Jul 2017
Not going to end well.
There's a repeated phrase:"on the work surface".
Continuity: "Stabs out his cigarette then lights another with the lit end."
Jaz is in a spot of bother.
Read full commentPosted in Grimms 80
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