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I like this story, JPH30.
Posted on Tue, 16 Sep 2014
I like this story, JPH30. Hopefully not just because of the parallels (except the family wealth). I like the telling of it. Easy and relaxed. Very warm. An easy style to lay back and enjoy. There are a few typos if you read through it but...Read full comment
Posted in The actor's son.
Hi Philip. What a complex
Posted on Thu, 21 Aug 2014
Hi Philip. What a complex and detailed account. I felt like the story could be expanded between the ladies leaving and the end of the shift. Potential.
I've spent time over a good few years visiting these places and your description of...
Posted in Waiting for Treacle Tart
Hi Nolan. Great to hear from
Posted on Fri, 11 Jul 2014
Hi Nolan. Great to hear from you, too. I thought this piece was done and dusted. Dead in the water. Invigorating to read the comments from you and Shannan. Often seems a waste of time writing this stuff. Will probably end up writing more because...Read full comment
Posted in Friday prayers
Fabulous! I love what you've
Posted on Thu, 20 Mar 2014
Fabulous! I love what you've done to the IP. Taken it, broken it all up, spat bubbles into it and thrown it into the wind! Linguistic loveliness. Don't go too far away. I get those feelings all the time.Read full comment
Posted in IP Babylon was built on Grain