Sundowner
By Parson Thru
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Sundowner
Everything with the Crowd
The Crowd is everything
You won’t learn anything from books
Trouble
Nothing but trouble
That lad of yours
I know
Not worth the bother
Aye
Don’t know why you bother
Trouble
Sundown
Downer
What’s his problem?
Funny bugger
Won’t learn anything from books
Nah
Stick with the Crowd
What we all having?
Never was right
That’s a strange look
Sundowner
Sundowner
Never worked
They don’t know what work is
Look at this
Windrush!
Came over from Australia
They should all go home
Having another?
What’s up with him?
Downer
Very strange
Not a nice look
Don’t like me
Never have
Won’t learn nothing from books
Was it all pretend?
None of it real?
Nothing on telly
The Crowd
Windrush
Australia
Window on the soul
Sundowner
Nothing can grow here
No plants
No fish
Nothing
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I think you have captured
I think you have captured something here, very well...'nothing can grow here' is a very tough line indeed, and true in many heartbreaking ways alround- extremely hard to observe, to be with...to care for...and to cope with...if this is the verb, I know this verb too:(
(here's the noun too -going to have a little late sundowner JD! To you. Cheers x
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Your other write does it, no?
this poem does no form very well! Your other write has the shiny stuff - even named by the nice man! :)
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Negativity takes many forms but I like this non-form poem
Sorry I haven,t been around lately, I've been tied down dealing with anothe kind of negativity.
I hope to be back soon
Cheers
enjoy your JD (I prefer Roche Fort 11.5% trappist beer but even that's out for the moment))
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