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Twixt Cibeles and Zanzibar

Almuerzo. Not quite dinner.
Cherry

El primero de junio

The first of June

Gaia visits

A flash in the pan

Trickledown

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141 of my comments have received 149 Great Feedback votes

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Yes, that last bit. Dougie

Posted on Fri, 21 Jul 2017

Yes, that last bit. Dougie seems to be driving the Volvo at one point.

Good break. We know what happened. Better than telling or showing.

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Second para: "Sorry to

Posted on Thu, 20 Jul 2017

Second para: "Sorry to interrupt" says Dougie. Del?

It's on the boil.

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Not going to end well.

Posted on Wed, 19 Jul 2017

Not going to end well.

There's a repeated phrase:"on the work surface".

Continuity: "Stabs out his cigarette then lights another with the lit end."

Jaz is in a spot of bother.

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I'm with you on this, but

Posted on Sun, 23 Jul 2017

I'm with you on this, but those people are clever. Don't want to upgrade your phone? We'll give it a battery that dies within 2 years. Think you can change the battery? Think again. It's now part of the phone. You've agitated me. Nice work.

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Is that you? Brilliant!

Posted on Sat, 15 Jul 2017

Is that you? Brilliant!

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Posted in The Sweet Heart Of Sugarland

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Wonderful.

Posted on Sat, 15 Jul 2017

Wonderful.

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So much feeling in so few

Posted on Mon, 10 Jul 2017

So much feeling in so few words. Lovely.

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Posted in Sentio Ergo Sum

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Stoic.

Posted on Sat, 01 Jul 2017

Stoic.

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Posted in Just coping (Song)

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Oh, Penny4athought, I so

Posted on Sat, 03 Jun 2017

Oh, Penny4athought, I so dearly hope so. Let's keep trying to spread the love. Great piece. Delicate treatment of a dreadful topic. Well done.

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Posted in Hearts Connect Us

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Very subtle. Very neat. My

Posted on Fri, 26 May 2017

Very subtle. Very neat. My head's spinning, but in an enjoyable way. Should the second "what the hell" be a grape, or did I miss a turning?

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Posted in Elvis, Poker Chips and Grapes

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