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Dirty little secrets, Stained glass windows or The tiger rodeo

Behind the bonhomie, the family dinners and the football lurks the question no one wants to be asked: Where are the bodies? Scratch the surface,...
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Angelo’s cows

A country excursion - sorry, couldn't wait until tomorrow
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Lost in a space

More overblown nonsense
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Distance

Thoughts on changing times

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157 of my comments have received 164 Great Feedback votes

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Keep going. Brilliant wisdom

Posted on Fri, 20 Jul 2018

Keep going. Brilliant wisdom at the end. Yes, I agree entirely.

In the first para, where you introduce N, the clause before "I have only one" is quite long. I had to re-read that section a couple of times. I didn't get in until nearly...

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Posted in I'm Not Disappointed, I'm Just Angry Chapter 5

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Thanks insert. I'm thinking

Posted on Tue, 17 Jul 2018

Thanks insert. I'm thinking along the lines of a "Spot The Ball" themed competition where writers post a piece with a line deliberately removed and readers place an "x" at the line's location. £5,000 cash prize or an Austin Allegro plus...

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Posted in Distance

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Honest and candid, as it

Posted on Tue, 17 Jul 2018

Honest and candid, as it should be (said the reader salivating for dirt). I know that feeling about standing outside the door, then walking away (sorry Tobi and whoever's seminar I circled, then abandoned). Full of the realities, this. We must...

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Posted in I'm Not Disappointed, I'm Just Angry Chapter 2

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I think you should. More

Posted on Wed, 11 Jul 2018

I think you should. More power to that pen. I'd apply for citizenship, but my ancestors jumped the gun. It has to be a grandparent. I used to know a lot of old songs, if that helps. ;)

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Posted in The meeting - good friends

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I'm sure you're both

Posted on Wed, 11 Jul 2018

I'm sure you're both guapisimos (handsome buggers), and your poetry too.

Courtesy of SpanishDict translator. Other translators are also available. :))

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Posted in The meeting - good friends

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What a beautiful and personal

Posted on Tue, 03 Jul 2018

What a beautiful and personal piece that just screams "Share me!".

A well-trodden path.

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Posted in Remnants

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Such a poetic reply is a

Posted on Mon, 02 Jul 2018

Such a poetic reply is a bonus. Hope you're both well Richard. Kevin

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Posted in Silence is Night

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I was barely aware of the

Posted on Fri, 29 Jun 2018

I was barely aware of the world, but I was aware of flower power. Great thinkpiece. It's hard looking back sometimes. If we have a 50th anniversary I'll be in my 80s. World keeps changing.

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Posted in Class of 1917 Reunion

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Great, london_calling. Bare

Posted on Wed, 20 Jun 2018

Great, london_calling. Bare bones, but I like what structure you have used, especially the lifting of the safety valve. An ongoing war against stigma, I think. Like all wars, fortunes ebb and flow.

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Posted in The Iceberg

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Can't argue with that.

Posted on Thu, 14 Jun 2018

Can't argue with that.

Ghostwritten, though.

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Posted in Vamos España

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