75 of my comments have received 80 Great Feedback votes
Posted on Wed, 22 Feb 2017
Really enjoyed the mood of this. A trivial point: I wondered whether the crows might be looking "along" the street and up the slope. Great piece on state of mind and forgetfulness. I'm trying to connect the initially squealing...Read full comment
Posted in Crowlines
Wow! penny4athought. What
Posted on Wed, 07 Dec 2016
Wow! penny4athought. What beautiful words to read. Last night, I was thinking of giving up. Serial contemplation of the dry well. When I first started sharing my scribbles, it was with the idea that if just one other person read them and...Read full comment
Posted in A problem shared
Nice, Ewan. Slightly less
Posted on Sat, 16 Jul 2016
Nice, Ewan. Slightly less passive than TV maybe, but who is really watching or listening and what will change? Evidence suggests the square root of nothing. The referendum is an example of people using their vote to actually change something,...Read full comment
Posted in More Trouble Every Day
Thank you, but let's not
Posted on Mon, 21 Mar 2016
Thank you, but let's not forget. I hope and pray for a less divided world and for the kind of people who might want to achieve that. Let's hope for more love, less hate and more sharing.Read full comment
What a wonderful piece, Bee.
Posted on Mon, 22 Feb 2016
What a wonderful piece, Bee. I never think of myself as a poet, but in that statement have poisoned the well. Maybe those who are inclined to write have a sensitivity to everything, which urges them to notice and examine, but takes them through...Read full comment
Posted in Song of the Oh So Knowing
A very haunting and dream
Posted on Thu, 15 Oct 2015
A very haunting and dream-like poem, Paul_a. I like the refrain.
Very visual. The images last in my mind long after reading.
Should the ceiling be peeling or is pealing intentional?
Great piece to wake up to.Read full comment
Posted in Kataskopos