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I have 986 stories published in 11 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 333885 times and 288 of my stories have been cherry picked.
75 of my 3,550 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 80 votes

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Cherry

Golden hour

The sun slants, bright and golden, down Calle de Alcalá. Poetry Monthly - September.

Guilt and castañas

Seasoning in the sun
Cherry

Aqua

Womb and tomb

Don't get old

Easily said
Cherry

Inheritance

I caught him last night, in that sideways glance
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75 of my comments have received 80 Great Feedback votes

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Warts an' all rendition. I

Posted on Fri, 11 Aug 2017

Warts an' all rendition. I love the fact you keep this human and individual, because that's where it's at.
Contradictorally (no squiggly red line!) my mind jumped straight to structures: the before and after. Trying to rationally manage and...

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Posted in 2002-05 My memories of working at a hostel for homeless men

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Heard about your dad, too,

Posted on Mon, 01 May 2017

Heard about your dad, too, Elsie. Lots of love. Xxx

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Posted in Shlamek

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This is great. Epic and so

Posted on Mon, 31 Jul 2017

This is great. Epic and so much humanity. It might have been written by H.G. Wells. If there's one thought it leaves as far as the aesthetic goes, having established a meter, it might be worth looking at the penultimate stanza again to see if the...

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Posted in The Melancholy Ballad of the Clockwork Soldier

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An enjoyable piece of

Posted on Mon, 31 Jul 2017

An enjoyable piece of reflective writing, PoppyS.

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Posted in Timeline

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Yes, that last bit. Dougie

Posted on Fri, 21 Jul 2017

Yes, that last bit. Dougie seems to be driving the Volvo at one point.

Good break. We know what happened. Better than telling or showing.

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Posted in Grimms82

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Second para: "Sorry to

Posted on Thu, 20 Jul 2017

Second para: "Sorry to interrupt" says Dougie. Del?

It's on the boil.

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Posted in Grimms81

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Not going to end well.

Posted on Wed, 19 Jul 2017

Not going to end well.

There's a repeated phrase:"on the work surface".

Continuity: "Stabs out his cigarette then lights another with the lit end."

Jaz is in a spot of bother.

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Posted in Grimms 80

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I'm with you on this, but

Posted on Sun, 23 Jul 2017

I'm with you on this, but those people are clever. Don't want to upgrade your phone? We'll give it a battery that dies within 2 years. Think you can change the battery? Think again. It's now part of the phone. You've agitated me. Nice work.

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Posted in I’m not upgrading

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Is that you? Brilliant!

Posted on Sat, 15 Jul 2017

Is that you? Brilliant!

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Posted in The Sweet Heart Of Sugarland

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Wonderful.

Posted on Sat, 15 Jul 2017

Wonderful.

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Posted in The Sweet Heart Of Sugarland

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