75 of my comments have received 80 Great Feedback votes
Warts an' all rendition. I
Posted on Fri, 11 Aug 2017
Warts an' all rendition. I love the fact you keep this human and individual, because that's where it's at.
Contradictorally (no squiggly red line!) my mind jumped straight to structures: the before and after. Trying to rationally manage and...
This is great. Epic and so
Posted on Mon, 31 Jul 2017
This is great. Epic and so much humanity. It might have been written by H.G. Wells. If there's one thought it leaves as far as the aesthetic goes, having established a meter, it might be worth looking at the penultimate stanza again to see if the...Read full comment
I'm with you on this, but
Posted on Sun, 23 Jul 2017
I'm with you on this, but those people are clever. Don't want to upgrade your phone? We'll give it a battery that dies within 2 years. Think you can change the battery? Think again. It's now part of the phone. You've agitated me. Nice work.Read full comment
Posted in I’m not upgrading