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My stories have been read 349281 times and 301 of my stories have been cherry picked.
79 of my 3,719 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 84 votes

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Cherry

Everything just so

The Great American Dream
Gold cherry

Jogging in the park

Sunday morning exertion
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Cherry

Fort Mars

They're singing my praises back home

So

Spare a thought, if you can

Tariq's

Taberna Pompeyana

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79 of my comments have received 84 Great Feedback votes

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Go easy ice rivers. When I

Posted on Fri, 01 Sep 2017

Go easy ice rivers. When I get like that, I always feel bad about my paragraphing and punctuation in the morning. ;)

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Posted in Mere

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Lovely, sean mcnulty. A

Posted on Sat, 12 Aug 2017

Lovely, sean mcnulty. A sense of everything slipping through your fingers. Hovers nicely between thoughts and things. I love how you zoom/focus in on the man for a moment then move straight on with your stream of thought. Felt like I was...

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Posted in The Treetops

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Like watching a home movie of

Posted on Fri, 18 Aug 2017

Like watching a home movie of the scenes in 8mm. You manage to maintain a distance between the telling and the action. Nice narrative style.

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Posted in #masculinity

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Flip-side. :)

Posted on Fri, 04 Aug 2017

Flip-side. :)

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Posted in What poetry is

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Warts an' all rendition. I

Posted on Fri, 11 Aug 2017

Warts an' all rendition. I love the fact you keep this human and individual, because that's where it's at.
Contradictorally (no squiggly red line!) my mind jumped straight to structures: the before and after. Trying to rationally manage and...

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Posted in 2002-05 My memories of working at a hostel for homeless men

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Heard about your dad, too,

Posted on Mon, 01 May 2017

Heard about your dad, too, Elsie. Lots of love. Xxx

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Posted in Shlamek

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This is great. Epic and so

Posted on Mon, 31 Jul 2017

This is great. Epic and so much humanity. It might have been written by H.G. Wells. If there's one thought it leaves as far as the aesthetic goes, having established a meter, it might be worth looking at the penultimate stanza again to see if the...

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Posted in The Melancholy Ballad of the Clockwork Soldier

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An enjoyable piece of

Posted on Mon, 31 Jul 2017

An enjoyable piece of reflective writing, PoppyS.

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Posted in Timeline

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Yes, that last bit. Dougie

Posted on Fri, 21 Jul 2017

Yes, that last bit. Dougie seems to be driving the Volvo at one point.

Good break. We know what happened. Better than telling or showing.

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Posted in Grimms82

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Second para: "Sorry to

Posted on Thu, 20 Jul 2017

Second para: "Sorry to interrupt" says Dougie. Del?

It's on the boil.

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Posted in Grimms81

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