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Lovely, sean mcnulty. A
Posted on Sat, 12 Aug 2017
Lovely, sean mcnulty. A sense of everything slipping through your fingers. Hovers nicely between thoughts and things. I love how you zoom/focus in on the man for a moment then move straight on with your stream of thought. Felt like I was...Read full comment
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Warts an' all rendition. I
Posted on Fri, 11 Aug 2017
Warts an' all rendition. I love the fact you keep this human and individual, because that's where it's at.
Contradictorally (no squiggly red line!) my mind jumped straight to structures: the before and after. Trying to rationally manage and...
This is great. Epic and so
Posted on Mon, 31 Jul 2017
This is great. Epic and so much humanity. It might have been written by H.G. Wells. If there's one thought it leaves as far as the aesthetic goes, having established a meter, it might be worth looking at the penultimate stanza again to see if the...Read full comment