Stephen Thom
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Story | Random thoughts... | Penny4athought | 3 | 2 years 4 weeks ago |
Story | clues | Di_Hard | 16 | 2 years 4 weeks ago |
Story | not ready to fly yet | Di_Hard | 16 | 2 years 4 weeks ago |
Story | wings, late summer | Di_Hard | 18 | 2 years 4 weeks ago |
Story | appeal | Di_Hard | 16 | 2 years 4 weeks ago |
Story | 28th April | Di_Hard | 20 | 2 years 4 weeks ago |
Story | Not too Much to Ask | Mark Burrow | 12 | 2 years 1 month ago |
Story | Tolkien on Disco Biscuits | Ewan | 4 | 2 years 1 month ago |
Story | The Maulter: Part 4-Riddlebrook | ArcaneEagle776 | 6 | 2 years 1 month ago |
Story | new dog for old | celticman | 12 | 2 years 1 month ago |
Story | The Corner Library | paborama | 8 | 2 years 1 month ago |
Story | Puss Moths | onemorething | 14 | 2 years 1 month ago |
Story | The Mauler: Part 3-The Oasis | ArcaneEagle776 | 4 | 2 years 1 month ago |
Story | Hours | rosaliekempthorne | 2 | 2 years 1 month ago |
Story | The Envy of Footprints | Robert Craven | 6 | 2 years 1 month ago |
Story | The Mauler: Part 2-Weak Necks | ArcaneEagle776 | 2 | 2 years 1 month ago |
Story | The Edge of The Earth | Sven | 4 | 2 years 1 month ago |
Collection | Pins (2020) | Stephen Thom | 0 | 2 years 1 month ago |
Story | Black Catters | Error_404 | 10 | 2 years 1 month ago |
Story | Who Knew? | Sorraya | 7 | 2 years 1 month ago |
Story | "Antediluvian Trouble" | Penny4athought | 6 | 2 years 1 month ago |
Story | "Antediluvian Trouble" Chapter 2 | Penny4athought | 7 | 2 years 1 month ago |
Story | The Mauler: Part 1-Step by Step | ArcaneEagle776 | 2 | 2 years 1 month ago |
Story | diminuendo | JupiterMoon | 7 | 2 years 1 month ago |
Story | Tales from the Psych Ward - Part 1 | Lem | 15 | 2 years 1 month ago |
Good work Hilary, clipped
Posted on Tue, 20 Nov 2018
Good work Hilary, clipped along at an engaging pace. I liked some of the touches throughout, 'in his mind he had many demons', and 'she wasn't letting him take control'. The latter was a strong, sudden, chilling sentence.
Read full commentPosted in A Casual Murder
I don't think I know how to
Posted on Thu, 08 Nov 2018
I don't think I know how to pronounce it haha. I should have called the website Abctales! Made the whole thing a black mirror type story
Read full commentPosted in Aura (17)
Ah that's the second phlegm
Posted on Tue, 06 Nov 2018
Ah that's the second phlegm misspelling i've racked up! Which probably means i've used that word once too many. How much phlegm is necessary for one story? That's what i really hope to learn from this.
Read full commentPosted in Aura (13)
That's interesting. I think I
Posted on Mon, 05 Nov 2018
That's interesting. I think I thought it would be cool for one bit, then I was like wait that doesn't work at all, or make any sense haha
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Absorbing stuff, great energy
Posted on Tue, 13 Nov 2018
Absorbing stuff, great energy and enthusiasm. Gritty and lots of great descriptions throughout. Cane clicking is really effective. Enjoyed.
Read full commentPosted in Jack The Being
I could make the very first
Posted on Thu, 08 Nov 2018
I could make the very first sentence 'a bad cold was going round...'
Read full commentPosted in Aura (15)
Cheers kindly again :) Had a
Posted on Tue, 06 Nov 2018
Cheers kindly again :) Had a first post-diagnostic support appointment yesterday and feeling a bit of an info overload atm, but I'll get stuck into this soon, over the weekend! Am game for the added academic jargon challenge ...
Read full commentPosted in Aspie Life
You've crafted something
Posted on Fri, 02 Nov 2018
You've crafted something pretty and warm and intriguing. Loved 'cool-water gaze', perfect description. I think the tone is really important here and you've got it down, warm inviting prose
Read full commentPosted in The Empathy Files. The Angel of Empathy (3)
Pretty, taut prose, lots of
Posted on Thu, 01 Nov 2018
Pretty, taut prose, lots of nice observational touches... subject suits your style too... always a strong heart/humanity underpinning everything you write I think...
Read full commentPosted in The Empathy Files. The Angel of Empathy (2)
Very affecting& transportive.
Posted on Thu, 25 Oct 2018
Very affecting& transportive. Beautiful diction and word combinations 'mind's oceanic slew', 'iron squall of sea', 'words slap and slur like breakers against rock'. A real language treat. Felt sad reading it but the 'steadfast against...
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