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Cheers kindly again :) Had a
Posted on Tue, 06 Nov 2018
Cheers kindly again :) Had a first post-diagnostic support appointment yesterday and feeling a bit of an info overload atm, but I'll get stuck into this soon, over the weekend! Am game for the added academic jargon challenge ...
Read full commentPosted in Aspie Life
You've crafted something
Posted on Fri, 02 Nov 2018
You've crafted something pretty and warm and intriguing. Loved 'cool-water gaze', perfect description. I think the tone is really important here and you've got it down, warm inviting prose
Read full commentPosted in The Empathy Files. The Angel of Empathy (3)
Pretty, taut prose, lots of
Posted on Thu, 01 Nov 2018
Pretty, taut prose, lots of nice observational touches... subject suits your style too... always a strong heart/humanity underpinning everything you write I think...
Read full commentPosted in The Empathy Files. The Angel of Empathy (2)
Very affecting& transportive.
Posted on Thu, 25 Oct 2018
Very affecting& transportive. Beautiful diction and word combinations 'mind's oceanic slew', 'iron squall of sea', 'words slap and slur like breakers against rock'. A real language treat. Felt sad reading it but the 'steadfast against...
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Very real, tender, sad and
Posted on Thu, 25 Oct 2018
Very real, tender, sad and thoughtful. The last paragraph is very pretty, in a sad way
Read full commentPosted in "Would she notice?"
A tough read, well-written.
Posted on Mon, 29 Oct 2018
A tough read, well-written. Little observational touches helped draw me in (pills in dosette box etc) and the thought processes and dialogue were really effective and affecting in their own way. Good work
Read full commentPosted in A Weekend with Family
'I will always identify that
Posted on Fri, 27 Jul 2018
'I will always identify that those were the good days' beautiful words, beautiful piece
Read full commentPosted in The Chair
Very affecting and honest.
Posted on Sun, 29 Jul 2018
Very affecting and honest. Tidy writing throughout too, you put yourself into it and it carries over to the reader. Lovely piece
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Nicely done. Something
Posted on Wed, 14 Feb 2018
Nicely done. Something different. Alliteration and sound and feeling. Like the word combinations - murmur curdles / rush chasmed / susurrus spray. Like this willingness to play with and create new images and ways of presenting words, it's brave...
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There's some brilliant
Posted on Thu, 15 Feb 2018
There's some brilliant options. 'by ginger.' 'Dang my melt'
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