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Posted on Tue, 19 Dec 2017
- Earl Grey
- let's face it
- invariably (unless deliberate as part of character's voice)
- pre-pubescent? - the character comes across as maybe 14/15 to me (esp. if he's a 3rd year)?
- Parallelled (british) ...
Posted in Day 1. Cope Muir High
Posted on Thu, 27 Jul 2017
Hi, I am insanely jealous of your skill, for which I compensate with petty typo-spotting:
Decent into madness
Manager of Citadel Theatre - consistent with the capitalisation
Within 48 hours, it would all...
Posted in Ghosts of the Leith Citadel