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I have 302 stories published in
20 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 159063 times
and 70 of my stories have been cherry picked.
6 of my 231 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 6 votes
Pab Roberts
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Leggy bespectacle
Stepping down the pavement Leggy, hoody-wrapped, thickened lenses A shade of Glasgow through the years I pass by with my sandwich And, as we cross...
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The Knights at Camelot in Christmas
Fitt I Right then! Time to start the story. The Knights of the Round Table we shall meet, via the tale of one of them: Noble Sir Gawain. And when we...
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- 120 reads
Athena
On Saturn’s green and marschy land, the Goddess Athena did land. Adrift from home and hope and fate, she’d had a lot upon her plate. So, settled in...
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- 128 reads
The 2nd of April (8th April 2022)
What do you do with the birthday of one deceased? A life that's ceased Has no punchline nor birthday drinks. If I die, then wish no more sad...
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Rum Barrels (7th April 2022)
Barrel-toed flights from saucy nighttime spots of Scoundrels dens where hens and cocks cluck and stagger 'gainst the mist light by candle-dark...
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Swashbuckling joy
Posted on Mon, 09 Jul 2018
Thank you for this, it got my inner parrot chirping, 'pieces of Eight!'
Read full commentPosted in FROM DAYS OF YORE
ZOMBIES!!!
Posted on Sat, 09 Dec 2017
- petal, or metal pencil case?
- A beautiful use of imagery, like the teasing start to a zombie flick
- fluffy gobs OF sheep's wool
- I saW you walkin
- One hand in front OF her
- Growing loUder
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Read full commentPosted in The Field
Feedback (& a few typos)
Posted on Tue, 19 Dec 2017
- Earl Grey
- let's face it
- invariably (unless deliberate as part of character's voice)
- pre-pubescent? - the character comes across as maybe 14/15 to me (esp. if he's a 3rd year)?
- Parallelled (british)
...
Read full commentPosted in Day 1. Cope Muir High
typo curmudgeon
Posted on Thu, 27 Jul 2017
Hi, I am insanely jealous of your skill, for which I compensate with petty typo-spotting:
Decent into madness
Read full commentManager of Citadel Theatre - consistent with the capitalisation
Within 48 hours, it would all...
Posted in Ghosts of the Leith Citadel