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StoryThe 2nd of April (8th April 2022) paborama04 years 6 months ago
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My stories

Cherry

The Rush

By paborama on Thu, 04 Jun 2026

Alright pals? Let me chum you doon the road. A will welcome you, a'll carry you Whether tapsaff, dreich-blastet, or lown, Time and the hour run...
Miscellaneous
Poem
Certificate U

Deep Time

By paborama on Wed, 16 Oct 2024

Deep Time Scene: A rocky, wind-swept coastline in Scotland, Siccar Point. The year is 1788. JAMES HUTTON, a man in his 60s, rugged from years of...
Historical Fiction
Other
Certificate PG
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Blast, Heave 24

By paborama on Mon, 08 Jul 2024

Heave, Blast A Carriage clock, cobwebs, velvet & panelling, marriage photo of Se, photo of Em; alone, he waits. The storm outside Se: Winding...
Talecatching
Other
Certificate 12

Oiled

By paborama on Wed, 29 May 2024

All the while I'm holding back From drinking From eating From loving Heart beating Breathing Running I'm holding me back A Spring oiled Baked, coiled...
Talecatching
Poem
Certificate PG
1 likes

The Oracle

By paborama on Mon, 11 Sep 2023

And so Without Warning us of Danger Portia Sybil And fizzing Down her chin Down there Where waters meet Sacred curse On Onan's soil Took root And...
Talecatching
Poem
Certificate PG

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6 of my comments have received 6 Great Feedback votes

1 Vote

Swashbuckling joy

Posted on Mon, 09 Jul 2018

Thank you for this, it got my inner parrot chirping, 'pieces of Eight!' 

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Posted in FROM DAYS OF YORE

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ZOMBIES!!!

Posted on Sat, 09 Dec 2017

  • petal, or metal pencil case?
  • A beautiful use of imagery, like the teasing start to a zombie flick
  • fluffy gobs OF sheep's wool
  • I saW you walkin
  • One hand in front OF her
  • Growing loUder
    • ...
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Posted in The Field

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Feedback (& a few typos)

Posted on Tue, 19 Dec 2017

  • Earl Grey
  • let's face it
  • invariably (unless deliberate as part of character's voice)
  • pre-pubescent? - the character comes across as maybe 14/15 to me (esp. if he's a 3rd year)?
  • Parallelled (british)
    • ...
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Posted in Day 1. Cope Muir High

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typo curmudgeon

Posted on Thu, 27 Jul 2017

Hi,  I am insanely jealous of your skill, for which I compensate with petty typo-spotting:

Decent into madness
Manager of Citadel Theatre - consistent with the capitalisation
Within 48 hours, it would all...

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Posted in Ghosts of the Leith Citadel