Stephen Thom
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| Type | Title | Author | Replies | Last updated |
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| Story | Hiss, Wow and Flutter | Ewan | 9 | 5 years 11 months ago |
| Story | The Language of Dead Flowers | agnosticnun | 18 | 5 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Philosophy and Cappuccino | agnosticnun | 12 | 5 years 11 months ago |
| Story | an old cliche | facetoface | 6 | 5 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Cycle Of Life | skinner_jennifer | 11 | 5 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Scream | airyfairy | 23 | 5 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Me and Judy Garland | Mark Say | 5 | 5 years 11 months ago |
| Story | 1994 Vintage Sindy-Space 4x4 Camper Home Jeep Mountain Fun. Original Box. | sid | 10 | 5 years 11 months ago |
| Story | untravelling path | Di_Hard | 14 | 5 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Chutes of Spring | Di_Hard | 12 | 5 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Never trust a writer | Parson Thru | 24 | 5 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Norwegian Wood | Terrence Oblong | 14 | 5 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Aura (32) | Stephen Thom | 7 | 5 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Aura (31) | Stephen Thom | 4 | 5 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Aura (30) | Stephen Thom | 6 | 5 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Aura (19) | Stephen Thom | 10 | 5 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Aura (29) | Stephen Thom | 8 | 5 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Aura (28) | Stephen Thom | 7 | 5 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Aura (27) | Stephen Thom | 10 | 5 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Aura (26) | Stephen Thom | 6 | 5 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Aura (25) | Stephen Thom | 3 | 5 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Aura (24) | Stephen Thom | 5 | 5 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Aura (21) | Stephen Thom | 7 | 5 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Aura (23) | Stephen Thom | 7 | 5 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Aura (22) | Stephen Thom | 12 | 5 years 11 months ago |








this was really effective.
Posted on Sat, 09 Jan 2016
this was really effective. people work in patterns huh? so it's easy to fall into patterns and feed off/mirror the people around you emotionally. structure was neatly done and brings out the content v well. hope you're well! :)
Read full commentPosted in Mother, mirror, daughter
very lovely and lyrical and
Posted on Sun, 10 Jan 2016
very lovely and lyrical and uplifting. the way it was set out supported the message well. liked the run of 'b' sounds in 'But buried under acceptance/Beats a childhood desire'. great work :)
Read full commentPosted in In A Lifetime...
enjoyed this, very well
Posted on Tue, 08 Dec 2015
enjoyed this, very well written, it came together really well. liked the word choice scattered throughout the first two viewpoints, ramped up the disdain...smacking, suck, squelch, revolting, greasy. Shifts felt like something different, and I...
Read full commentPosted in Lovebirds
marvellous, marvellous visual
Posted on Tue, 08 Dec 2015
marvellous, marvellous visual and fantastic, ethereal transportive quality, loved moments/phrases 'skies of the blackest lace', 'trapped behind wires' and 'sadness overwhelmed your wings'. v imaginative, swells to an uplifting ending
Read full commentPosted in Free (Poetry monthly)
wow this is a sensory treat..
Posted on Tue, 08 Dec 2015
wow this is a sensory treat... you must become very attuned to sound, naturally, over time... seems v effortless - here at the start there is the sharp 'k' sound 'ivory-musk drifting in the fickleness /of a dally-day dusk', & also the d...
Read full commentPosted in On Preparing a Fruit Salad
good work, enjoyed this, felt
Posted on Tue, 08 Dec 2015
good work, enjoyed this, felt like being pulled around on an epic journey. interesting sweep of thoughts, too, liked lines like 'In non-existing colour/In non-existing time'
Read full commentPosted in Infinity
great work! very entrancing,
Posted on Thu, 03 Dec 2015
great work! very entrancing, repetition worked fantastically.
Read full commentPosted in look away ..... .... ... .. . . . . . ."Poetry Monthly"
thought this was really
Posted on Wed, 14 Oct 2015
thought this was really pretty. transferring these thoughts onto clothing works well, kinda liked the 'f' sounds in the 2nd stanza (fibres, fall, fragrance) and the 's' sounds in the last (senses, salty, spicy, essence), tied in well with the...
Read full commentPosted in There you are
like how adaptable you are...
Posted on Sun, 11 Oct 2015
like how adaptable you are... keep pushing the envelope... can see the constants of great use of sound and sense again... really liked the sun: 'I can almost hear it vibrating'; the swishing and lingering, coils and cracks in this stranger...
Read full commentPosted in My Problem with Peyote
hey! this is wonderful work.
Posted on Mon, 24 Aug 2015
hey! this is wonderful work. you certainly achieved a feeling of momentum in it, pacing along on the rolling commas and 'y' sounds. i liked the way the commas increased at the end, framing 2/3/4 word bursts, as if in a sprint finish, whilst the...
Read full commentPosted in running in the rain
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