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138 of my comments have received 143 Great Feedback votes

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this was really effective.

Posted on Sat, 09 Jan 2016

this was really effective. people work in patterns huh? so it's easy to fall into patterns and feed off/mirror the people around you emotionally. structure was neatly done and brings out the content v well. hope you're well! :)

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Posted in Mother, mirror, daughter

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very lovely and lyrical and

Posted on Sun, 10 Jan 2016

very lovely and lyrical and uplifting. the way it was set out supported the message well. liked the run of 'b' sounds in 'But buried under acceptance/Beats a childhood desire'. great work :)

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Posted in In A Lifetime...

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enjoyed this, very well

Posted on Tue, 08 Dec 2015

enjoyed this, very well written, it came together really well. liked the word choice scattered throughout the first two viewpoints, ramped up the disdain...smacking, suck, squelch, revolting, greasy. Shifts felt like something different, and I...

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Posted in Lovebirds

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marvellous, marvellous visual

Posted on Tue, 08 Dec 2015

marvellous, marvellous visual and fantastic, ethereal transportive quality, loved moments/phrases 'skies of the blackest lace', 'trapped behind wires' and 'sadness overwhelmed your wings'. v imaginative, swells to an uplifting ending

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Posted in Free (Poetry monthly)

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wow this is a sensory treat..

Posted on Tue, 08 Dec 2015

wow this is a sensory treat... you must become very attuned to sound, naturally, over time... seems v effortless - here at the start there is the sharp 'k' sound 'ivory-musk drifting in the fickleness /of a dally-day dusk', & also the d...

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Posted in On Preparing a Fruit Salad

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good work, enjoyed this, felt

Posted on Tue, 08 Dec 2015

good work, enjoyed this, felt like being pulled around on an epic journey. interesting sweep of thoughts, too, liked lines like 'In non-existing colour/In non-existing time' 

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Posted in Infinity

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great work! very entrancing,

Posted on Thu, 03 Dec 2015

great work! very entrancing, repetition worked fantastically.

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Posted in look away ..... .... ... .. . . . . . ."Poetry Monthly"

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thought this was really

Posted on Wed, 14 Oct 2015

thought this was really pretty. transferring these thoughts onto clothing works well, kinda liked the 'f' sounds in the 2nd stanza (fibres, fall, fragrance) and the 's' sounds in the last (senses, salty, spicy, essence), tied in well with the...

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Posted in There you are

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like how adaptable you are...

Posted on Sun, 11 Oct 2015

like how adaptable you are... keep pushing the envelope... can see the constants of great use of sound and sense again... really liked the sun:  'I can almost hear it vibrating'; the swishing and lingering, coils and cracks in this stranger...

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Posted in My Problem with Peyote

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hey! this is wonderful work.

Posted on Mon, 24 Aug 2015

hey! this is wonderful work. you certainly achieved a feeling of momentum in it, pacing along on the rolling commas and 'y' sounds. i liked the way the commas increased at the end, framing 2/3/4 word bursts, as if in a sprint finish, whilst the...

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