I have 136 stories published in
8 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 158413 times and 164 of my stories have been cherry picked.
148 of my 1,178 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 155 votes
148 of my comments have received 155 Great Feedback votes
You've crafted something
Posted on Fri, 02 Nov 2018
You've crafted something pretty and warm and intriguing. Loved 'cool-water gaze', perfect description. I think the tone is really important here and you've got it down, warm inviting proseRead full comment
Very affecting& transportive.
Posted on Thu, 25 Oct 2018
Very affecting& transportive. Beautiful diction and word combinations 'mind's oceanic slew', 'iron squall of sea', 'words slap and slur like breakers against rock'. A real language treat. Felt sad reading it but the 'steadfast against...Read full comment
Posted in Out of Season
A tough read, well-written.
Posted on Mon, 29 Oct 2018
A tough read, well-written. Little observational touches helped draw me in (pills in dosette box etc) and the thought processes and dialogue were really effective and affecting in their own way. Good workRead full comment
Posted in A Weekend with Family
Nicely done. Something
Posted on Wed, 14 Feb 2018
Nicely done. Something different. Alliteration and sound and feeling. Like the word combinations - murmur curdles / rush chasmed / susurrus spray. Like this willingness to play with and create new images and ways of presenting words, it's brave...Read full comment
Posted in Chutes of Spring
Interesting piece. It's all
Posted on Tue, 23 Jan 2018
Interesting piece. It's all relative, experience of life, and it feels a joyous, pretty moment. The title feels well chosen, in that way that there is often explaining. I may be reading it wrong - it's late. Much enjoyed though, good workRead full comment
Posted in She Explained