Deliberately Evolving

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Holly Fisher

A performance poet and protégée of the late Bee – a beautiful poet and former editor on ABC Tales. #seeabeethinkofme

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Cherry

Beautiful Truth

Performance Poem see the link and listen rather than read. It is in French and English - credit to my sister Matilda for the beautiful translation.
Cherry

beyond the storm

Reflecting on perspective. As a performance poet - I have included the video link so that you may hear it rather than read it.
Cherry

A Mothers Love

my cousin just had a baby in lockdown and asked me if I would write him a poem. Having not met him yet I wrote one of a mothers love, hoping she didn't meant that she wanted one about a cat or something. It's best to hear my poems since I am mainly a performance poet - link to the video included.
Cherry

Grounded

A visual poem with link to the visuals
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Cherry

Grounded

Reach up, stretch high, unroll spine to sky. Bow, recall how small we are humility. Grasp the earth, say thanks for precious life. Step back, press...

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47 of my comments have received 47 Great Feedback votes

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very sensory - I can smell

Posted on Mon, 08 Jun 2020

very sensory - I can smell the air and feel the breeze on my skin in just a few short lines. Excellent.

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Posted in Dream with the breeze

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Brilliant. Love all the

Posted on Mon, 01 Jun 2015

Brilliant. Love all the criminal slang words - so fun but at the same time slightly worrying and sad. I read it through a few times because I enjoyed the rhythm of it so much.

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Posted in My Dad, the ringer.

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So clever - l love seeing

Posted on Tue, 02 Jan 2018

So clever - l love seeing shape poems.

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Posted in The Journey Back

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This is brilliant. I read it

Posted on Sun, 19 Mar 2017

This is brilliant. I read it through a couple of times to absorb it fully.

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Posted in Titero-y-Gaca

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Oh my gosh you're right! I

Posted on Thu, 29 Dec 2016

Oh my gosh you're right! I told you I've been sick, my brain hasn't kicked back in yet.

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Posted in Tim Timpany - Poetry Monthly

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I'm so glad this got pick of

Posted on Wed, 16 Nov 2016

I'm so glad this got pick of the day. It really deserves it.

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Posted in Blue

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I'm sitting in IKEA sobbing.

Posted on Wed, 16 Nov 2016

I'm sitting in IKEA sobbing. This is a beautiful poem, well constructed and heartfelt. Bee would have had a lot to say. I wish I could say more.

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Posted in Blue

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Hey HM - Bee has been awake

Posted on Sun, 05 Jun 2016

Hey HM - Bee has been awake today and I showed her your video, which she watched all the way through. It was really sweet. I like it as a country music song - that worked really well. Thank you so much for making that into a song and for taking...

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Posted in Wanna by Bee - Video

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Yes this is clever and I like

Posted on Thu, 12 May 2016

Yes this is clever and I like the repetition and the progression. It works really well

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Posted in Delicate

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This is so funny. You've

Posted on Mon, 22 Feb 2016

This is so funny. You've caught the essence of the poet so well. I totally get this and can fully make fun of myself for these sentiments. It made me laugh.

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Posted in Song of the Oh So Knowing

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