Deliberately Evolving

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My stories have been read 79136 times and 74 of my stories have been cherry picked.
46 of my 899 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 45 votes

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Holly Fisher

No longer accidentally existing but deliberately deciding that my life is for a reason no matter how small the reason may be - like whether I remembered to pick up milk. If I didn’t, maybe you should consider whether milk is really good for you and get it yourself next time.

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Wish list

Dear Santa, (it’s come to this - I’m writing to a fictional symbol of a holiday masquerading Christian, dressed in pagan clothing, sending him this...
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Tribute to Bee

2 years since Bee passed. Here is a tribute to one of her poems with her beautiful granddaughter Mia.
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2017 Poetry Medley

Poetically, 2017 started with a forgotten copse, once walked. My mother in tow of a gaggle of little kids I rose early with mine one Sunday,...
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Rebel Hair - with video

Rebel hair - video https://youtu.be/7iO2NBFRHKU I always had long hair, strong hair, gold hair, wavy hair, just the way they like it, natural, not...
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46 of my comments have received 45 Great Feedback votes

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Brilliant. Love all the

Posted on Mon, 01 Jun 2015

Brilliant. Love all the criminal slang words - so fun but at the same time slightly worrying and sad. I read it through a few times because I enjoyed the rhythm of it so much.

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Posted in My Dad, the ringer.

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So clever - l love seeing

Posted on Tue, 02 Jan 2018

So clever - l love seeing shape poems.

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Posted in The Journey Back

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This is brilliant. I read it

Posted on Sun, 19 Mar 2017

This is brilliant. I read it through a couple of times to absorb it fully.

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Posted in Titero-y-Gaca

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Oh my gosh you're right! I

Posted on Thu, 29 Dec 2016

Oh my gosh you're right! I told you I've been sick, my brain hasn't kicked back in yet.

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Posted in Tim Timpany - Poetry Monthly

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I'm so glad this got pick of

Posted on Wed, 16 Nov 2016

I'm so glad this got pick of the day. It really deserves it.

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Posted in Blue

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I'm sitting in IKEA sobbing.

Posted on Wed, 16 Nov 2016

I'm sitting in IKEA sobbing. This is a beautiful poem, well constructed and heartfelt. Bee would have had a lot to say. I wish I could say more.

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Posted in Blue

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Hey HM - Bee has been awake

Posted on Sun, 05 Jun 2016

Hey HM - Bee has been awake today and I showed her your video, which she watched all the way through. It was really sweet. I like it as a country music song - that worked really well. Thank you so much for making that into a song and for taking...

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Posted in Wanna by Bee - Video

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Yes this is clever and I like

Posted on Thu, 12 May 2016

Yes this is clever and I like the repetition and the progression. It works really well

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Posted in Delicate

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This is so funny. You've

Posted on Mon, 22 Feb 2016

This is so funny. You've caught the essence of the poet so well. I totally get this and can fully make fun of myself for these sentiments. It made me laugh.

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Posted in Song of the Oh So Knowing

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I feel a cold loneliness in

Posted on Wed, 13 Jan 2016

I feel a cold loneliness in this poem. It's really good.

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Posted in Chandelier

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