Deliberately Evolving
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very sensory - I can smell
Posted on Mon, 08 Jun 2020
very sensory - I can smell the air and feel the breeze on my skin in just a few short lines. Excellent.
Read full commentPosted in Dream with the breeze
This is brilliant. I read it
Posted on Sun, 19 Mar 2017
This is brilliant. I read it through a couple of times to absorb it fully.
Read full commentPosted in Titero-y-Gaca
Oh my gosh you're right! I
Posted on Thu, 29 Dec 2016
Oh my gosh you're right! I told you I've been sick, my brain hasn't kicked back in yet.
Read full commentPosted in Tim Timpany - Poetry Monthly
I'm so glad this got pick of
Posted on Wed, 16 Nov 2016
I'm so glad this got pick of the day. It really deserves it.
Read full commentPosted in Blue
I'm sitting in IKEA sobbing.
Posted on Wed, 16 Nov 2016
I'm sitting in IKEA sobbing. This is a beautiful poem, well constructed and heartfelt. Bee would have had a lot to say. I wish I could say more.
Read full commentPosted in Blue
Hey HM - Bee has been awake
Posted on Sun, 05 Jun 2016
Hey HM - Bee has been awake today and I showed her your video, which she watched all the way through. It was really sweet. I like it as a country music song - that worked really well. Thank you so much for making that into a song and for taking...
Read full commentPosted in Wanna by Bee - Video
Yes this is clever and I like
Posted on Thu, 12 May 2016
Yes this is clever and I like the repetition and the progression. It works really well
Read full commentPosted in Delicate
This is so funny. You've
Posted on Mon, 22 Feb 2016
This is so funny. You've caught the essence of the poet so well. I totally get this and can fully make fun of myself for these sentiments. It made me laugh.
Read full commentPosted in Song of the Oh So Knowing
I feel a cold loneliness in
Posted on Wed, 13 Jan 2016
I feel a cold loneliness in this poem. It's really good.
Read full commentPosted in Chandelier
This is a fantastic idea. I
Posted on Thu, 24 Dec 2015
This is a fantastic idea. I love a party too - whatever the excuse for a knees up (booze up). I'll be there with a bottle.
Read full commentPosted in Party
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