Deliberately Evolving

Read more about The world as seen through a creeping Vine
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Before she died

By Deliberately Evolving on Wed, 03 Jun 2026

When your sense of self becomes blurred, Lost in patterns, Fractured. What had appeared whole, Split personas. Are any real? Of any substance? My...

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Briefly a snowflake

By Deliberately Evolving on Wed, 03 Jun 2026

A somatic description of the scientific process of a snowflake forming in a cloud

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As the Bee flies

By Deliberately Evolving on Thu, 17 Jun 2021

In memory of Bee who lives on in the lives she touched as she flew through life. #seeabeethinkofme

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Beautiful Truth

By Deliberately Evolving on Mon, 08 Jun 2020

Performance Poem see the link and listen rather than read. It is in French and English - credit to my sister Matilda for the beautiful translation.

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very sensory - I can smell

Posted on Mon, 08 Jun 2020

very sensory - I can smell the air and feel the breeze on my skin in just a few short lines. Excellent.

Posted in Dream with the breeze

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This is great. I might not

Posted on Wed, 03 Jun 2026

This is great. I might not have grasped your intention but - it makes me envision a bloated, arrogant leader who made decisions that led to the destruction of mankind and now brags their survival. A striking symbol of the leaders of today.

Posted in The Last Human

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This is brilliant. I read it

Posted on Sun, 19 Mar 2017

This is brilliant. I read it through a couple of times to absorb it fully.

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Oh my gosh you're right! I

Posted on Thu, 29 Dec 2016

Oh my gosh you're right! I told you I've been sick, my brain hasn't kicked back in yet.

Posted in Tim Timpany - Poetry Monthly

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I'm so glad this got pick of

Posted on Wed, 16 Nov 2016

I'm so glad this got pick of the day. It really deserves it.

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I'm sitting in IKEA sobbing.

Posted on Wed, 16 Nov 2016

I'm sitting in IKEA sobbing. This is a beautiful poem, well constructed and heartfelt. Bee would have had a lot to say. I wish I could say more.

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Hey HM - Bee has been awake

Posted on Sun, 05 Jun 2016

Hey HM - Bee has been awake today and I showed her your video, which she watched all the way through. It was really sweet. I like it as a country music song - that worked really well. Thank you so much for making that into a song and for taking...

Posted in Wanna by Bee - Video

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Yes this is clever and I like

Posted on Thu, 12 May 2016

Yes this is clever and I like the repetition and the progression. It works really well