Deliberately Evolving

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beyond the storm

By Deliberately Evolving on Mon, 11 May 2020

Reflecting on perspective. As a performance poet - I have included the video link so that you may hear it rather than read it.

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A Mothers Love

By Deliberately Evolving on Tue, 05 May 2020

my cousin just had a baby in lockdown and asked me if I would write him a poem. Having not met him yet I wrote one of a mothers love, hoping she didn't meant that she wanted one about a cat or something. It's best to hear my poems since I am mainly a performance poet - link to the video included.

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Grounded

By Deliberately Evolving on Sat, 21 Dec 2019

A visual poem with link to the visuals

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Grounded

By Deliberately Evolving on Mon, 08 Jul 2019

Reach up, stretch high, unroll spine to sky. Bow, recall how small we are humility. Grasp the earth, say thanks for precious life. Step back, press...

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47 of my comments have received 47 Great Feedback votes

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This is a fantastic idea. I

Posted on Thu, 24 Dec 2015

This is a fantastic idea. I love a party too - whatever the excuse for a knees up (booze up). I'll be there with a bottle.

Posted in Party

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This is a very evocative and

Posted on Fri, 18 Dec 2015

This is a very evocative and clever piece of writing and describes the situation extremely well. If only it would touch the heart of the person it should the most and yet only the kind hearted will be the ones saddened.

Posted in Sparrow

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These are are extremely

Posted on Wed, 09 Dec 2015

These are are extremely clever. The depth and importance of the subjects coupled with the jokey rythm of the Limerick bring a rather dark humour to the whole thing.

Posted in Lotsa Limericks - It Couldn't be Verse

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Oh my gosh - take it to HR.

Posted on Thu, 10 Dec 2015

Oh my gosh - take it to HR. That's complete bullying and harassment. Don't let her get away with it.

Posted in Anger Management

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That is good news - as good

Posted on Fri, 04 Dec 2015

That is good news - as good as you could hope for in the circumstances anyway. I know you might feel like you are not out of the woods yet and you still have cancer but it's a positive milestone passed. You can take comfort that your suffering...

Posted in Result! (part 1)

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I think we all had them in

Posted on Sat, 24 Oct 2015

I think we all had them in one form or another. My son says there are monsters in his room - he is 2. We ask him what he would like us to do with them and he says "take them down to the conservatory - they can sleep there". So we do.

Posted in Baddies in the dark

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Interesting piece. I liked

Posted on Fri, 23 Oct 2015

Interesting piece. I liked the voices too. How they think and express. Made me sad because there are many such families struggling. It's easy to judge but when you hear each story you find reasons why and how things have become that way. People...

Posted in The Youngest Sister

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Brilliant! I loved every word

Posted on Fri, 23 Oct 2015

Brilliant! I loved every word of this and who wouldn't love Tom and that awful cardigan.

Posted in Sons and Mothers

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This is a poem of great depth

Posted on Sat, 17 Oct 2015

This is a poem of great depth and courage. It's really inspiring.

Only one side point: is it supposed to be "taught me the lesson of not trusting anyone"?

Posted in I - WAS - NOT

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I was waiting for that ending

Posted on Fri, 16 Oct 2015

I was waiting for that ending all the way through. How often have we spoken to our children like that in order to protect them from something nasty. It struck a chord.