Pat G

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I have 34 stories published in 0 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 30268 times and 30 of my stories have been cherry picked.
20 of my 312 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 19 votes

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My stories

Gold cherry

Visiting Mom

So much that should have been said, but no longer can be.
Gold cherry

Hollow

Sweetness clings in the memory
Cherry

Iron: Man

Our Iron: Man stands at a tumescent angle
Cherry

Twisted trees

an epoch with a bounty to be paid

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20 of my comments have received 19 Great Feedback votes

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Great. All that storied

Posted on Wed, 23 May 2018

Great. All that storied energy breaking through.

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Posted in cotyledons

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...the only growing is old. I

Posted on Thu, 12 Apr 2018

...the only growing is old. I like that line of bitter humour in this dark and powerful poem.

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Posted in wind

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inflated with memories

Posted on Sat, 24 Mar 2018

inflated with memories

So much in so few words

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Posted in One by One

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Beautiful writing.

Posted on Fri, 09 Mar 2018

Beautiful writing.

I love your transition line:

That is how the sky was this evening

facing North leaving the supermarket.

And I love your (correct) punctuation.

 

 

 

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Posted in Walking home from shopping 8/3/18

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I feel the fox padding

Posted on Thu, 15 Feb 2018

I feel the fox padding through this lively churchyard. Ah, the muck of it all. Fine writing.

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Posted in Old Dog-Fox In Bleak Midwinter

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The first few lines are so

Posted on Fri, 02 Feb 2018

The first few lines are so powerful I was hooked. "Hinged with memory" - a great line.

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Posted in February low tide

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You're right, I think, in the

Posted on Sun, 12 Nov 2017

You're right, I think, in the sentiment here. The doubts, the questioning, the sadness. I like the break from (marching) form.

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Posted in Civic Duty

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That's cheered me on a rainy

Posted on Thu, 16 Jun 2016

That's cheered me on a rainy day. And I like "froths of elder".

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Posted in The Hare in the Middle

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Great. Now the reader loves

Posted on Sat, 04 Jun 2016

Great. Now the reader loves Uncle Liam too. Use of when at line starts is perfect.

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Posted in Uncle Liam

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Makes me feel I am there.

Posted on Wed, 01 Jun 2016

Makes me feel I am there.

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Posted in Visiting Bury Ditches

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