Home Read Write Forums Blogs Pat GPrimary tabsView(active tab) Track I have 32 stories published in 0 collections on the site. My stories have been read 72751 times and 30 of my stories have been cherry picked.19 of my 303 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 19 votes My stories Type - Any -StoryNon-fictionOtherPoemPoetry MonthlyBiography Genre - Any -NoirSpiritualYoung WritersSurrealTalecatchingScience fictionRomanceQuotationsRantReviewsTravelUnclassifiedWesternPhilosophyOther Non-fictionEroticaFantasyHistorical FictionDramaCrimeBiographyChildren'sHorrorHumourNatureOpinionOther FictionMiscellaneousLoveInspiration Point (work that responds to our weekly writing cue)JournalAutobiography Awards Cherry-picked - Any -TrueFalse Pick of the day - Any -TrueFalse Poem of the week - Any -TrueFalse Story of the week - Any -TrueFalse Stories per page 510204060 Visiting Mom By Pat G on Sat, 07 Apr 2018 So much that should have been said, but no longer can be.Poetry MonthlyCertificate 12 Read more about Visiting Mom 23 comments Log in to post comments 6386 reads Undercurrents By Pat G on Wed, 04 Apr 2018 touches that cause tremblesInspiration Point (work that responds to our weekly writing cue)PoemCertificate 12 Read more about Undercurrents 10 comments Log in to post comments 2828 reads Hollow By Pat G on Fri, 17 Nov 2017 Sweetness clings in the memoryPoemCertificate U Read more about Hollow 11 comments Log in to post comments 3434 reads Iron: Man By Pat G on Wed, 08 Jun 2016 Our Iron: Man stands at a tumescent anglePoetry MonthlyCertificate 18 Read more about Iron: Man 9 comments Log in to post comments 2880 reads Twisted trees By Pat G on Wed, 01 Jun 2016 an epoch with a bounty to be paidPoemCertificate PG Read more about Twisted trees 5 comments Log in to post comments 1477 reads Pages1 2 3 4 5 6 7 next › last » 19 of my comments have received 19 Great Feedback votes 1 VoteGreat. All that storiedPosted on Wed, 23 May 2018Great. All that storied energy breaking through. Read full commentPosted in cotyledons 1 Vote...the only growing is old. IPosted on Thu, 12 Apr 2018...the only growing is old. I like that line of bitter humour in this dark and powerful poem. Read full commentPosted in wind 1 Voteinflated with memoriesPosted on Sat, 24 Mar 2018inflated with memories So much in so few words Read full commentPosted in One by One 1 VoteBeautiful writing.Posted on Fri, 09 Mar 2018Beautiful writing. I love your transition line: That is how the sky was this evening facing North leaving the supermarket. And I love your (correct) punctuation. Read full commentPosted in Walking home from shopping 8/3/18 1 VoteI feel the fox paddingPosted on Thu, 15 Feb 2018I feel the fox padding through this lively churchyard. Ah, the muck of it all. Fine writing. Read full commentPosted in Old Dog-Fox In Bleak Midwinter 1 VoteThe first few lines are soPosted on Fri, 02 Feb 2018The first few lines are so powerful I was hooked. "Hinged with memory" - a great line. Read full commentPosted in February low tide 1 VoteYou're right, I think, in thePosted on Sun, 12 Nov 2017You're right, I think, in the sentiment here. The doubts, the questioning, the sadness. I like the break from (marching) form. Read full commentPosted in Civic Duty 1 VoteThat's cheered me on a rainyPosted on Thu, 16 Jun 2016That's cheered me on a rainy day. And I like "froths of elder". Read full commentPosted in The Hare in the Middle 1 VoteGreat. Now the reader lovesPosted on Sat, 04 Jun 2016Great. Now the reader loves Uncle Liam too. Use of when at line starts is perfect. Read full commentPosted in Uncle Liam 1 VoteMakes me feel I am there.Posted on Wed, 01 Jun 2016Makes me feel I am there. Read full commentPosted in Visiting Bury Ditches Pages1 2 next › last »
Pat GPrimary tabsView(active tab) Track I have 32 stories published in 0 collections on the site. My stories have been read 72751 times and 30 of my stories have been cherry picked.19 of my 303 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 19 votes My stories Type - Any -StoryNon-fictionOtherPoemPoetry MonthlyBiography Genre - Any -NoirSpiritualYoung WritersSurrealTalecatchingScience fictionRomanceQuotationsRantReviewsTravelUnclassifiedWesternPhilosophyOther Non-fictionEroticaFantasyHistorical FictionDramaCrimeBiographyChildren'sHorrorHumourNatureOpinionOther FictionMiscellaneousLoveInspiration Point (work that responds to our weekly writing cue)JournalAutobiography Awards Cherry-picked - Any -TrueFalse Pick of the day - Any -TrueFalse Poem of the week - Any -TrueFalse Story of the week - Any -TrueFalse Stories per page 510204060 Visiting Mom By Pat G on Sat, 07 Apr 2018 So much that should have been said, but no longer can be.Poetry MonthlyCertificate 12 Read more about Visiting Mom 23 comments Log in to post comments 6386 reads Undercurrents By Pat G on Wed, 04 Apr 2018 touches that cause tremblesInspiration Point (work that responds to our weekly writing cue)PoemCertificate 12 Read more about Undercurrents 10 comments Log in to post comments 2828 reads Hollow By Pat G on Fri, 17 Nov 2017 Sweetness clings in the memoryPoemCertificate U Read more about Hollow 11 comments Log in to post comments 3434 reads Iron: Man By Pat G on Wed, 08 Jun 2016 Our Iron: Man stands at a tumescent anglePoetry MonthlyCertificate 18 Read more about Iron: Man 9 comments Log in to post comments 2880 reads Twisted trees By Pat G on Wed, 01 Jun 2016 an epoch with a bounty to be paidPoemCertificate PG Read more about Twisted trees 5 comments Log in to post comments 1477 reads Pages1 2 3 4 5 6 7 next › last » 19 of my comments have received 19 Great Feedback votes 1 VoteGreat. All that storiedPosted on Wed, 23 May 2018Great. All that storied energy breaking through. Read full commentPosted in cotyledons 1 Vote...the only growing is old. IPosted on Thu, 12 Apr 2018...the only growing is old. I like that line of bitter humour in this dark and powerful poem. Read full commentPosted in wind 1 Voteinflated with memoriesPosted on Sat, 24 Mar 2018inflated with memories So much in so few words Read full commentPosted in One by One 1 VoteBeautiful writing.Posted on Fri, 09 Mar 2018Beautiful writing. I love your transition line: That is how the sky was this evening facing North leaving the supermarket. And I love your (correct) punctuation. Read full commentPosted in Walking home from shopping 8/3/18 1 VoteI feel the fox paddingPosted on Thu, 15 Feb 2018I feel the fox padding through this lively churchyard. Ah, the muck of it all. Fine writing. Read full commentPosted in Old Dog-Fox In Bleak Midwinter 1 VoteThe first few lines are soPosted on Fri, 02 Feb 2018The first few lines are so powerful I was hooked. "Hinged with memory" - a great line. Read full commentPosted in February low tide 1 VoteYou're right, I think, in thePosted on Sun, 12 Nov 2017You're right, I think, in the sentiment here. The doubts, the questioning, the sadness. I like the break from (marching) form. Read full commentPosted in Civic Duty 1 VoteThat's cheered me on a rainyPosted on Thu, 16 Jun 2016That's cheered me on a rainy day. And I like "froths of elder". Read full commentPosted in The Hare in the Middle 1 VoteGreat. Now the reader lovesPosted on Sat, 04 Jun 2016Great. Now the reader loves Uncle Liam too. Use of when at line starts is perfect. Read full commentPosted in Uncle Liam 1 VoteMakes me feel I am there.Posted on Wed, 01 Jun 2016Makes me feel I am there. Read full commentPosted in Visiting Bury Ditches Pages1 2 next › last »
Great. All that storied
Posted on Wed, 23 May 2018
Great. All that storied energy breaking through.
Read full commentPosted in cotyledons
...the only growing is old. I
Posted on Thu, 12 Apr 2018
...the only growing is old. I like that line of bitter humour in this dark and powerful poem.
Read full commentPosted in wind
inflated with memories
Posted on Sat, 24 Mar 2018
inflated with memories
So much in so few words
Read full commentPosted in One by One
Beautiful writing.
Posted on Fri, 09 Mar 2018
Beautiful writing.
I love your transition line:
That is how the sky was this evening
facing North leaving the supermarket.
And I love your (correct) punctuation.
Posted in Walking home from shopping 8/3/18
I feel the fox padding
Posted on Thu, 15 Feb 2018
I feel the fox padding through this lively churchyard. Ah, the muck of it all. Fine writing.
Read full commentPosted in Old Dog-Fox In Bleak Midwinter
The first few lines are so
Posted on Fri, 02 Feb 2018
The first few lines are so powerful I was hooked. "Hinged with memory" - a great line.
Read full commentPosted in February low tide
You're right, I think, in the
Posted on Sun, 12 Nov 2017
You're right, I think, in the sentiment here. The doubts, the questioning, the sadness. I like the break from (marching) form.
Read full commentPosted in Civic Duty
That's cheered me on a rainy
Posted on Thu, 16 Jun 2016
That's cheered me on a rainy day. And I like "froths of elder".
Read full commentPosted in The Hare in the Middle
Great. Now the reader loves
Posted on Sat, 04 Jun 2016
Great. Now the reader loves Uncle Liam too. Use of when at line starts is perfect.
Read full commentPosted in Uncle Liam
Makes me feel I am there.
Posted on Wed, 01 Jun 2016
Makes me feel I am there.
Read full commentPosted in Visiting Bury Ditches
Pages