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My stories

Gold cherry

Visiting Mom

So much that should have been said, but no longer can be.
Gold cherry

Hollow

Sweetness clings in the memory
Cherry

Iron: Man

Our Iron: Man stands at a tumescent angle
Cherry

Twisted trees

an epoch with a bounty to be paid

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19 of my comments have received 19 Great Feedback votes

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Great. All that storied

Posted on Wed, 23 May 2018

Great. All that storied energy breaking through.

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Posted in cotyledons

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...the only growing is old. I

Posted on Thu, 12 Apr 2018

...the only growing is old. I like that line of bitter humour in this dark and powerful poem.

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Posted in wind

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inflated with memories

Posted on Sat, 24 Mar 2018

inflated with memories

So much in so few words

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Posted in One by One

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Beautiful writing.

Posted on Fri, 09 Mar 2018

Beautiful writing.

I love your transition line:

That is how the sky was this evening

facing North leaving the supermarket.

And I love your (correct) punctuation.

 

 

 

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Posted in Walking home from shopping 8/3/18

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I feel the fox padding

Posted on Thu, 15 Feb 2018

I feel the fox padding through this lively churchyard. Ah, the muck of it all. Fine writing.

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Posted in Old Dog-Fox In Bleak Midwinter

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The first few lines are so

Posted on Fri, 02 Feb 2018

The first few lines are so powerful I was hooked. "Hinged with memory" - a great line.

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Posted in February low tide

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You're right, I think, in the

Posted on Sun, 12 Nov 2017

You're right, I think, in the sentiment here. The doubts, the questioning, the sadness. I like the break from (marching) form.

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Posted in Civic Duty

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That's cheered me on a rainy

Posted on Thu, 16 Jun 2016

That's cheered me on a rainy day. And I like "froths of elder".

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Posted in The Hare in the Middle

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Great. Now the reader loves

Posted on Sat, 04 Jun 2016

Great. Now the reader loves Uncle Liam too. Use of when at line starts is perfect.

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Posted in Uncle Liam

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Makes me feel I am there.

Posted on Wed, 01 Jun 2016

Makes me feel I am there.

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Posted in Visiting Bury Ditches

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