london_calling79

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I have 131 stories published in 5 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 91787 times and 98 of my stories have been cherry picked.
81 of my 1,092 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 81 votes

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She's never spoken before. Not to me. Not properly. Just platitudes. How are you? Cold today isn't it? Have a good weekend! There's a shadow on his...
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Compassion Fatigue

Hey you. Yeah you. I know your grandad died last night but conjugate this verb. Get into groups now. Group one: Data says you're the smart kids...
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Heartwood

Strip the bark. Peel thin slivers of gritted question and whittled skin. But leave the heartwood. Pluck the leaves. Leave bald bird stalks that...
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Satellite.

Satellite. I'm home. Home home. Skin shed, an eager snake rattling down this birth canal past facades that used to be places, fumbling fingers and...
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A Letter to my New Tory MP

Dear Mr Rowley, I am writing to you, first of all to congratulate you on your recent electoral victory in North East Derbyshire. You did not receive...

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81 of my comments have received 81 Great Feedback votes

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I love the cadence. To drop

Posted on Sat, 09 Dec 2017

I love the cadence. To drop the lines as you've done and maintain the mood is a skill. Agree with PhillipS the last line makes it.

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Posted in True nature

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Absolutely dripping with

Posted on Sun, 18 Dec 2016

Absolutely dripping with atmosphere and the hums of deep life.

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Posted in Golgotha In The Rain

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I like this already. It's

Posted on Sat, 17 Dec 2016

I like this already. It's intriguing and snappy, has a first scene of a film feeling to it - breezy. It's not easy to write about football authentically so I'll be interested to see how you carry on with this. Keep posting and welcome to the site...

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Posted in The Loanee - Page 1

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I found the insertion of

Posted on Fri, 16 Dec 2016

I found the insertion of images jarring at first but when I got used to them it gave a powerful effect akin to 'We didn't start the fire.'

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Posted in subjected/ subjugated

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Absorbed by this. Put me in

Posted on Mon, 25 Jul 2016

Absorbed by this. Put me in mind of the opening chapter of 'The Curious Incident...' not just with the plot but also with the (very different) twist on the everyday your protagonist has. Is this the start of something?

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Posted in Witnesses

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Great voice. Clipped prose.

Posted on Tue, 12 Jul 2016

Great voice. Clipped prose. Dances along nicely. Would love to read more. Welcome!

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Posted in Memoirs of a Wanna Be: Intro and Chapter 1

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Great re-write. Much more

Posted on Thu, 07 Jul 2016

Great re-write. Much more focused and evocative.

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Posted in Her

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Reminded me of Plath in some

Posted on Mon, 11 Jul 2016

Reminded me of Plath in some lines. Great writing.

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Posted in Addicts

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This is gorgeous - the rose

Posted on Fri, 08 Jul 2016

This is gorgeous - the rose lines in particular. Can I make a suggestion to steer away from some cliches like 'lit up every room'? The rest of your lines are so well crafted you could go for something more obscure.

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Posted in Beautiful

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I think there's loads to love

Posted on Thu, 07 Jul 2016

I think there's loads to love in here. One bit I thought you could change would be
'With a certainty 
Of knowledge
Which ironically
Belies her 
Relatively minimal
Years.'

In my opinion it's a little...

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Posted in Her

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