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I have 123 stories published in 8 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 511188 times and 167 of my stories have been cherry picked.
126 of my 1,327 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 128 votes

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The song of the giant’s daughter.

Promise me, never to let the children forget the songs of Finn and the Fiánna.
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No Better Past (IP)

Sometimes, we find better selves like lost toys, as if we’ve dusted cobwebs to reveal old ribcaged hearts garbed in younger, rawer flesh that didn’t...
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The Iceberg

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The Princess of Odd Numbers

It’s getting dark. The cypresses, slender, respectful genuflect to the sunset, a horse’s eye in all its majesty. In their junctures, iced from winter...
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Them

Nobody touches them. That’s respect there.

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126 of my comments have received 128 Great Feedback votes

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I loved the poem. Great

Posted on Sat, 16 Jun 2018

I loved the poem. Great economy of words. I would only change the title. Personally I like to make the reader work a bit, let’s them invest more of themselves into the writing.

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Posted in Where I Belong

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This is an engaging piece. I

Posted on Sun, 17 Jun 2018

This is an engaging piece. I enjoyed the journey and the cyclical structure, perhaps a sign of the monotony of a life without others. The voice is clear and speech is good. I felt the descriptions at the start (particularly of hair) were a little...

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Posted in End of the World

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I can’t stop reading this. It

Posted on Sat, 28 Apr 2018

I can’t stop reading this. It’s gorgeous. Love the final, transcendental image.

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Posted in Collaboration

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I enjoyed reading this as it

Posted on Sat, 07 Apr 2018

I enjoyed reading this as it’s from a different perspective.

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Posted in MAGIC FOR MERLIN

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Fantastic piece. Vivid and

Posted on Sun, 01 Apr 2018

Fantastic piece. Vivid and lip-smackingly aural.

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Posted in Alternative Prayer of Remembrance, Easter 2018

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That gear change at the end

Posted on Mon, 19 Mar 2018

That gear change at the end of the first verse...can hear it resound. Stunning imagery.

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Posted in Shifting Sands

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FUCK yes.

Posted on Wed, 21 Feb 2018

FUCK yes.

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Posted in coldest planet

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I love the cadence. To drop

Posted on Sat, 09 Dec 2017

I love the cadence. To drop the lines as you've done and maintain the mood is a skill. Agree with PhillipS the last line makes it.

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Posted in True nature

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I like this already. It's

Posted on Sat, 17 Dec 2016

I like this already. It's intriguing and snappy, has a first scene of a film feeling to it - breezy. It's not easy to write about football authentically so I'll be interested to see how you carry on with this. Keep posting and welcome to the site...

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Posted in The Loanee - Page 1

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I found the insertion of

Posted on Fri, 16 Dec 2016

I found the insertion of images jarring at first but when I got used to them it gave a powerful effect akin to 'We didn't start the fire.'

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Posted in subjected/ subjugated

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