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I have 116 stories published in 8 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 140935 times and 146 of my stories have been cherry picked.
123 of my 1,402 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 122 votes

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No Better Past (IP)

Sometimes, we find better selves like lost toys, as if we’ve dusted cobwebs to reveal old ribcaged hearts garbed in younger, rawer flesh that didn’t...
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The Iceberg

https://www.thecalmzone.net/ #MARKYOURMAN
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The Princess of Odd Numbers

It’s getting dark. The cypresses, slender, respectful genuflect to the sunset, a horse’s eye in all its majesty. In their junctures, iced from winter...
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Them

Nobody touches them. That’s respect there.
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Poem of the week

Surasawa Pond

By Surasawa pond on a billboard a holy man paints a lie: ‘On the third day of the third month the dragon of this pond will ascend to heaven.’ Two men...

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123 of my comments have received 122 Great Feedback votes

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Such sparseness and sorrow.

Posted on Mon, 25 Jun 2018

Such sparseness and sorrow. Makes the narrator seem so small. Do you need the ‘unseen’ at the end?

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Posted in In the Shade

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This is beautifully described

Posted on Mon, 25 Jun 2018

This is beautifully described. Such a musical sound.

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Posted in Brightness without burning

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Fascinating insight into this

Posted on Mon, 25 Jun 2018

Fascinating insight into this barren world.

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Posted in AFTER

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What’s about ‘begs’? ‘He

Posted on Thu, 21 Jun 2018

What’s about ‘begs’? ‘He slipped her fruity begs over her crime-ridden hips’. Pretty hot.

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Posted in Pants

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Excellent, excellent writing.

Posted on Thu, 21 Jun 2018

Excellent, excellent writing.

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Posted in Splatters

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This is very well described.

Posted on Thu, 21 Jun 2018

This is very well described. the loss of that poor lawnmower just caged and ready! I wanted more description of the sounds you've carved so well. And the smells that rain brings - but that's a personal preference.

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Posted in Splatters

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Superb ending. Erotic without

Posted on Mon, 18 Jun 2018

Superb ending. Erotic without being filthy. Delicate without being flimsy and funny without being crude. Well judged and enjoyable.

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Posted in The Love Addict

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Enjoyed the rhythm of this

Posted on Mon, 18 Jun 2018

Enjoyed the rhythm of this one. It’s sharp and edgy. Can hear the snap of that voice.

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Posted in What I Learned

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I heard he actually played in

Posted on Thu, 14 Jun 2018

I heard he actually played in goal for Portsmouth. Pope John Paul II was also a handy goalkeeper and Jo Nesbo was a professional for Molde.

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Posted in Vamos España

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Dickens in goal.

Posted on Thu, 14 Jun 2018

Dickens in goal.

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Posted in Vamos España

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