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Decided to stop talking about it and do it.
124 of my comments have received 123 Great Feedback votes
You're skillfully developing
Posted on Mon, 25 Jun 2018
You're skillfully developing a sense of character in John without giving away his past. It may sound a little simplistic but it put me in mind of the way Ludlum does it with his Jason Bourne character in the original text before he became a pulp...Read full comment
Posted in Autonomy Pt 3
This is very well described.
Posted on Thu, 21 Jun 2018
This is very well described. the loss of that poor lawnmower just caged and ready! I wanted more description of the sounds you've carved so well. And the smells that rain brings - but that's a personal preference.Read full comment
Posted in Splatters