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I have 128 stories published in 8 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 230176 times and 162 of my stories have been cherry picked.
130 of my 1,405 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 131 votes

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Cherry

The ends of my world

I can’t feel the presence of a god here so keenly now that I can touch the ends of my world , run a finger across a drumlin of hallowed herringbone...
Cherry

Stripling

I’ve never met you. But I want you to love me. You were me before I had formed my open church door of mouth my stripling heartstring. I had forgotten...
Cherry

vicarious trauma

i used to be able to repair myself sprout phantom limbs better versions now, i flick rocks at the faultlines and the whole thing caves it starts in...
Cherry

The song of the giant’s daughter.

Promise me, never to let the children forget the songs of Finn and the Fiánna.
Cherry

I'm Not Disappointed, I'm Just Angry Chapter 9

Ofsted The one guaranteed way to lose a room in teaching is start by saying, ‘Ofsted will look for...’ A third of the room will panic, this third...

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130 of my comments have received 131 Great Feedback votes

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There is a great skipping of

Posted on Sat, 30 Jun 2018

There is a great skipping of topic here which shows your scope and skill as a writer as it never seems illogical. You’ve described thoughts most people have had with dexterity.

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Posted in Someone Died Today

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There is such a fine line

Posted on Fri, 29 Jun 2018

There is such a fine line between satire and reality. I’m going to check this listing in five years time and tally up how many are actually being aired. Fingers crossed for ‘Secret service duck’.

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Posted in Today's TV

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What a lovely poem. Hope you

Posted on Fri, 29 Jun 2018

What a lovely poem. Hope you enjoy your new kittens.

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Posted in Two Purrfect Sweethearts

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NIce.

Posted on Fri, 29 Jun 2018

NIce.

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Posted in Larry and Mick Give it Some Oomph

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Absolutely gorgeous. Like

Posted on Tue, 26 Jun 2018

Absolutely gorgeous. Like floating.

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Posted in a break from hoovering

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A powerful image, well

Posted on Tue, 26 Jun 2018

A powerful image, well described. Have you ever read D.H Lawrence's 'The Rainbow'? There's a gorgeous paragraph about - 'He was the doorway to her, she was the doorway to him'. 

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Posted in Release

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You're skillfully developing

Posted on Mon, 25 Jun 2018

You're skillfully developing a sense of character in John without giving away his past. It may sound a little simplistic but it put me in mind of the way Ludlum does it with his Jason Bourne character in the original text before he became a pulp...

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Posted in Autonomy Pt 3

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This is beautifully described

Posted on Mon, 25 Jun 2018

This is beautifully described. Such a musical sound.

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Posted in Brightness without burning

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Fascinating insight into this

Posted on Mon, 25 Jun 2018

Fascinating insight into this barren world.

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Posted in AFTER

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What’s about ‘begs’? ‘He

Posted on Thu, 21 Jun 2018

What’s about ‘begs’? ‘He slipped her fruity begs over her crime-ridden hips’. Pretty hot.

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Posted in Pants

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