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You're skillfully developing
Posted on Mon, 25 Jun 2018
You're skillfully developing a sense of character in John without giving away his past. It may sound a little simplistic but it put me in mind of the way Ludlum does it with his Jason Bourne character in the original text before he became a pulp...Read full comment
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