Deliberately Evolving

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47 of my 852 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 47 votes

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Hollyanna

A performance poet and protégée of the late Bee – a beautiful poet and former editor on ABC Tales. #seeabeethinkofme

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2017 Poetry Medley

Poetically, 2017 started with a forgotten copse, once walked. My mother in tow of a gaggle of little kids I rose early with mine one Sunday,...
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Rebel Hair - with video

Rebel hair - video https://youtu.be/7iO2NBFRHKU I always had long hair, strong hair, gold hair, wavy hair, just the way they like it, natural, not...
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Closing the accounts of the late Deborah Hambrook

Closing the accounts of the late Deborah Hambrook That was the title of the letter that came. I was expecting it because the money was transferred,...
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Snapshot #Iwokeuplikethis

Seeing pictures on instagram of perfect hipsters with the perfect man, strolling through streams with perfectly manicured feet, I'm inspired to snap...

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47 of my comments have received 47 Great Feedback votes

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This is so beautiful and so

Posted on Fri, 12 Jun 2015

This is so beautiful and so real. I'm there - they are my neighbours.

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Posted in The Birds and the Bees

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Just a name change? The poem

Posted on Mon, 08 Jun 2015

Just a name change? The poem is lovely. Very moving which is why I commented twice on it. It was worth a second comment. 

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Posted in The Weatherman said...

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The ocean is an awe inspiring

Posted on Thu, 04 Jun 2015

The ocean is an awe inspiring sight captured beautifully buy this powerful poem.

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Posted in 'Loyalty'

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Brilliant poem - well worthy

Posted on Thu, 23 Apr 2015

Brilliant poem - well worthy to be picked just like the blackberries. 

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Posted in Fear of Wasps

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Really good imagery. Love the

Posted on Mon, 01 Jun 2015

Really good imagery. Love the twists and flow of the poem to match the flight of the hunters.

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Posted in Night Moves...

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I think the title of your

Posted on Wed, 27 May 2015

I think the title of your poem sums up your poem very nicely. 

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Posted in Mind Games

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This is very sad and poignant

Posted on Wed, 27 May 2015

This is very sad and poignant. I can understand the feeling here and the way you have summed things up in that protective role reversal. 

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Posted in Journeys

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Powerful

Posted on Mon, 18 May 2015

This is a very powerful poem. I don't have much more to say about that. 

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Posted in The Waiting Room

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That is a very good summary

Posted on Tue, 26 May 2015

That is a very good summary of the story - it could easily be a children's book it's so simple.

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Posted in 40 Days and 40 Nights

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I really like the graceful

Posted on Tue, 26 May 2015

I really like the graceful swooping rhythm of this poem. I feel the flight of the birds and the breeze and the freedom of flight. 

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Posted in Coastal Path (3) – birds

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