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2435 of my comments have received 2487 Great Feedback votes

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No sense in talking about the

Posted on Wed, 20 Jun 2018

No sense in talking about the cracks.
Blokes don’t need help,
just a good night’s sleep
a shower
a shit
a shave and
a shag
my father said
my mates said
my brother said

that makes me so...

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Posted in The Iceberg

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I really like the meticulous

Posted on Sun, 26 Nov 2017

I really like the meticulous detail in this piece - the timetable of the woman's day works well as a frame for the narrative, and the small events come across as very authentic, as does the relationship between the couple.

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Posted in May you live all the days of your life

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Hi - what a fascinating peice

Posted on Mon, 10 Feb 2014

Hi - what a fascinating peice this is! it was really interesting the way you compared the different geographical prejudices. My only criticisim is that we're kind of left hanging .... there's so little about when you're actually there. I was...

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Posted in 7 days in Tehran

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Hello fining - welcome to ABC

Posted on Sat, 04 Jan 2014

Hello fining - welcome to ABC. This has a nice flow to it, but since you've specifically asked, I do have a couple of observations:

 

firstly, it might have been better to post the prologue and chapter one seperately - easier for...

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Posted in August Shadow (working title): Prologue

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Genocidal leanings - hard to

Posted on Fri, 19 Sep 2025

Genocidal leanings - hard to get over those! Very funny Sean, thank you!

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Posted in Rational Thinking Thing

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Phew!

Posted on Fri, 19 Sep 2025

Phew!

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Posted in Another Station story!

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I think I've run out of

Posted on Thu, 18 Sep 2025

I think I've run out of things to say that I haven't already said - please do keep going. Do you have the whole plot in your head? Do you know how it ends or are you still working it out?

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Posted in Ghigau 14

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I'd give anything for a trip

Posted on Thu, 18 Sep 2025

I'd give anything for a trip through a beige goo splat - what an asset!

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Posted in Beige Goo Splat - (part 3)

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I'm very glad you decided

Posted on Tue, 16 Sep 2025

I'm very glad you decided where to goo with this - and so quickly too. Also super relieved about Monty. Well done Jane!

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Posted in Beige Goo Splat - (part 2)

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Thank goodness for reverse

Posted on Mon, 15 Sep 2025

Thank goodness for reverse charge phone calls in those days. I wonder if you can still do one?

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