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I really like the meticulous
Posted on Sun, 26 Nov 2017
I really like the meticulous detail in this piece - the timetable of the woman's day works well as a frame for the narrative, and the small events come across as very authentic, as does the relationship between the couple.
Suggestions: In...
Read full commentPosted in May you live all the days of your life
Hi - what a fascinating peice
Posted on Mon, 10 Feb 2014
Hi - what a fascinating peice this is! it was really interesting the way you compared the different geographical prejudices. My only criticisim is that we're kind of left hanging .... there's so little about when you're actually there. I was...
Read full commentPosted in 7 days in Tehran
Hello fining - welcome to ABC
Posted on Sat, 04 Jan 2014
Hello fining - welcome to ABC. This has a nice flow to it, but since you've specifically asked, I do have a couple of observations:
firstly, it might have been better to post the prologue and chapter one seperately - easier for...
Read full commentPosted in August Shadow (working title): Prologue
I'm really looking forward to
Posted on Mon, 04 Aug 2025
I'm really looking forward to the photos of Manoushka in her little Leeds United football strip as proof that she's a supporter Turlough?
Thank you very much for this long anticipated diary entry. Like A Year in Provence but with more...
Read full commentPosted in Violetta Are You Better?
Brilliance (and very funny) -
Posted on Sat, 02 Aug 2025
Brilliance (and very funny) - thank you Sean!
Read full commentPosted in Rodeo
'.. the pen is mine now.
Posted on Thu, 31 Jul 2025
'.. the pen is mine now.
And I know how to use it.'
Yes you do!
Read full commentPosted in A writer, I am becoming.
This says so much in so few
Posted on Wed, 16 Jul 2025
This says so much in so few words - congratulations b, very well deserved golden cherries
If you're trying to post from an Android device, the glitch fix is here:
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Read full commentPosted in The Obituary Reader
What marandina says - you
Posted on Thu, 24 Jul 2025
What marandina says - you have a real talent for creating worlds - I'm enjoying this new one - thank you!
Read full commentPosted in The Vale - Part 3
That is one very classy igloo
Posted on Thu, 24 Jul 2025
That is one very classy igloo in the picture. I didn't realise they had little windows like that - maybe it's the 'Famous Author' model?
Looking forward to whatever you (our most distinguished published author) write next, and thank you...
Read full commentPosted in You are surprised as a published writer…
This is a nicely solid
Posted on Wed, 23 Jul 2025
This is a nicely solid introduction to new characters. A few suggestions below:
deliciously elicit - illicit?
Danielle smiled indifferently before salting away into the lounge area - shrugged indifferently? Or perhaps half-smiled...
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