| Story | The Stealth of Great Misfortune | Ewan | 5 | 6 years 10 months ago |
| Story | The Inbox | hoalarg1 | 3 | 6 years 10 months ago |
| Story | thoughts in the small hours | Di_Hard | 9 | 6 years 10 months ago |
| Story | Clive James, Farewell. | luigi_pagano | 6 | 6 years 10 months ago |
| Story | Me and Judy Garland | Mark Say | 5 | 6 years 10 months ago |
| Story | trojan horse | celticman | 4 | 6 years 10 months ago |
| Story | Mars | lavadis | 13 | 6 years 10 months ago |
| Story | 1994 Vintage Sindy-Space 4x4 Camper Home Jeep Mountain Fun. Original Box. | sid | 10 | 6 years 10 months ago |
| Blog entry | Story and Poem of the Week and Inspiration Point | insertponceyfre... | 0 | 6 years 10 months ago |
| Forum topic | Schism Update: Down but Not Out | Chinobus | 4 | 6 years 10 months ago |
| Story | untravelling path | Di_Hard | 14 | 6 years 10 months ago |
| Story | The book of wonders- Chapter 1 | anandkrishnan | 4 | 6 years 10 months ago |
| Story | Fast Forward … | Rhiannonw | 6 | 6 years 10 months ago |
| Story | Self Love | Vivien Williams | 3 | 6 years 10 months ago |
| Story | On the Right Tracks | luigi_pagano | 12 | 6 years 10 months ago |
| Story | Granny Glue | forest_for_ever | 4 | 6 years 10 months ago |
| Story | Light Thieves | D Marie | 3 | 6 years 10 months ago |
| Story | We Fools | Ewan | 4 | 6 years 10 months ago |
| Blog entry | London Reading Event Coming Up! | insertponceyfre... | 10 | 6 years 10 months ago |
| Blog entry | Story and Poem of the Week and Inspiration Point | insertponceyfre... | 0 | 6 years 10 months ago |
| Story | An Obliging Treecreeper | Rhiannonw | 13 | 6 years 10 months ago |
| Story | An Apocalyptic Deluge | luigi_pagano | 6 | 6 years 10 months ago |
| Story | The Last Man in my Life 3 | jeand | 6 | 6 years 10 months ago |
| Story | Norwegian Wood | Terrence Oblong | 13 | 6 years 11 months ago |
| Story | A Masterpiece | luigi_pagano | 3 | 6 years 11 months ago |
now I'm enjoying this! I like
Posted on Thu, 11 Feb 2016
now I'm enjoying this! I like the ambiguity of the relationship between the two men - the way it seems to have more depth than in the previous parts. I think there's more balance in this part too, between action and backstory, although I...
Read full commentPosted in The Net Caster (Part Three)
hahah - Bee they are
Posted on Mon, 08 Feb 2016
hahah - Bee they are brilliant! I think I've come across photos of them while searching for pictures for your Journey series. I do hope you're going to write the knitter a thank you poem and direct her to ABCTales to read it? (and the rest of...
Read full commentPosted in Knitted Knockers
Me too! You might want to
Posted on Mon, 01 Feb 2016
Me too! You might want to remove one of the two consequentlys here:
Consequently, a young gentleman was often judged on the size of his folly. Consequently, any young unmarried gentleman who never displayed his ha-ha to his intended was...
Read full commentPosted in A Notorious Historical Dandy
Prologues are definitely not
Posted on Mon, 18 Jan 2016
Prologues are definitely not old hat when they're as good as this one. I'll leave the pork pie and dinner date for someone else but will just highlight the tiny bit of comic genius that made me snigger:
'St Diodatis, patron saint of...
Read full commentPosted in Highly Strung
A nice start. I like the slow
Posted on Sun, 17 Jan 2016
A nice start. I like the slow introduction of the typical English beach stuff, and then all the gradual clues that it's far from typical. I'd definitely like to read more and find out what happens!
Read full commentPosted in Bullets Over Broadstairs
how about keeping the
Posted on Tue, 12 Jan 2016
how about keeping the kamikaze mention on the TV documentary, then have dead german pilots/bombers in the man's memories. I think the Japanese only operated in the East and against the Us forces. You'd really lose something if you had to do away...
Read full commentPosted in As long as sea beats on stone
A well-painted authentic
Posted on Thu, 07 Jan 2016
A well-painted authentic picture albeit a grim one. There are a couple of places where the present tense shouldn't be.
Read full commentPosted in The Drop Zone
The fourth and fifth
Posted on Sun, 27 Dec 2015
The fourth and fifth paragraph need some editing (typos etc) and are a little confusing in places. Other than that I really enjoyed this. A really good introduction and a fabulous ending - well done!
Read full commentPosted in The Glasses
what a beautiful rhythm this
Posted on Sat, 26 Dec 2015
what a beautiful rhythm this has bee
Read full commentPosted in You Send Me
a very interesting piece!
Posted on Sat, 26 Dec 2015
a very interesting piece!
Read full commentPosted in “We must dare to invent the future”
Pages