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I have 350 stories published in
11 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 172233 times
and 53 of my stories have been cherry picked.
47 of my 436 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 47 votes
Graham Fewell
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A Coiled Spring
Release The Coiled Spring Tight and tensioned ‘neath Terra firma Lifeless, cold dark days slumbered past Bristling tension stirs, seeking sun Coiled...
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No Stupid Cupid
No Stupid Cupid I’m a contract thriller A one-shot love-maker My arrows dipped in passion Never fail to thrill her But heed my warning Love chains...
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First Love - Tender Love
First Love, Tender Love Dear Anne, ‘What might have been’ a phrase so worn an yet so true and in those hazy, melancholy moments my wandering mind...
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Dear Creator
Dear Creator Dear Creator, Sorry for the awful mess And sorry ‘bout your status Foolish man’s grand design Has left you far behind His juggernaut of...
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Beautiful
Posted on Mon, 12 Aug 2019
You have such a talent for rhythm and a sensitivity for writing on your surroundings...a beautiful poem.
Read full commentPosted in Through the year month by month
Cat Therapy
Posted on Sat, 06 Oct 2018
I so adored this story. Partly because it is true and beautiful, partly because I adore cats and one saved my wife's sanity. Tali came to us in April 2014. She jumped on my son's shoulders at the cat rescue centre....'she never does that!'...
Read full commentPosted in How writing (and a cat called Daisy) may have saved my life...
Congratulations on Poem of
Posted on Fri, 22 Jan 2021
Congratulations on Poem of the Week. This wonderful piece of work is so re-readable and deserves classic status.
Read full commentPosted in To a Lone Sailor
One can feel the pain over
Posted on Fri, 22 Jan 2021
One can feel the pain over the one gift that has been torm from us at present. The joy of a hug is beyond words. I was reminded the other day just how much we can smile with our eyes and the verse beginnine 'our eyes over the mask....' is so...
Read full commentPosted in Hugs
'May the beaches you are
Posted on Fri, 22 Jan 2021
'May the beaches you are swept on sing sweet mysteries...' oh boy! what wonderful poetry. For me personally a great poem brings me back again and again. I see something new every time I read it. Your poem takes me into a wonderful dreamworld....
Read full commentPosted in To a Lone Sailor
Fun. I loved it. Thank you.
Posted on Thu, 24 Dec 2020
Fun. I loved it. Thank you.
Read full commentPosted in Christmas Rhyme
A winner as usual
Posted on Mon, 16 Mar 2020
Hi Luigi,
An enchanting poem and an interesting viewpoint (pun intended) of a legendary sea captain. I always love your work.
Graham
Read full commentPosted in Here Be Dragons
I love your gift as as a
Posted on Thu, 30 Jan 2020
I love your gift as as a story teller. I felt easy and involved in the short story Luigi. You took me back to 1974 when I met my now wife in Switzerland. Lovely, lovely piece of writing.
Read full commentPosted in A Certain Smile
Worthy of Poem of the week in
Posted on Sat, 29 Jun 2019
Worthy of Poem of the week in my book. As Incet says BRILLIANT...I love the metaphors...
Read full commentPosted in Weather warning
I always will love the
Posted on Mon, 24 Jun 2019
I always will love the transition to the beautiful butterfly. One of the miracles of creation. Loved the rhythm.
Read full commentPosted in Mystery in the Chrysalis
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