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Smells a Funny Colour
Smell’s a Funny Colour Red shouts loud Rougely proud Romantic sniffed Valentine gift Orange peeled It’s core revealed Citrus stinging Vit C giving...
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Changing Times
Changing Times Innocence departing Thirteen seasons hatched A mystical dawn was beckoning Leading me, drawing me Form now had carnal meaning Drawn by...
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No Going Back
No Going Back Life itself is a one way ticket often comprising of changes that are forever. True, in a physical sense we can retrace our steps, but...
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Mercury Rising
Mercury Rising Oh boy do we like to talk about the weather! I always say that in the UK at least we’d be left speechless if the topic of the weather...
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Zig not Zag
I'm fortunate that my 'wrong turns' turned out right.
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Beautiful
Posted on Mon, 12 Aug 2019
You have such a talent for rhythm and a sensitivity for writing on your surroundings...a beautiful poem.
Read full commentPosted in Through the year month by month
Cat Therapy
Posted on Sat, 06 Oct 2018
I so adored this story. Partly because it is true and beautiful, partly because I adore cats and one saved my wife's sanity. Tali came to us in April 2014. She jumped on my son's shoulders at the cat rescue centre....'she never does that!'...
Read full commentPosted in How writing (and a cat called Daisy) may have saved my life...
Wow! This piece is hauntingly
Posted on Sat, 22 Feb 2025
Wow! This piece is hauntingly true. I saw myself in many parts of it and it scared me (in a good way) I realised how selfish I have been at times.. Thankfully I came out the other side and woke up before ti was too late.. The other spooky...
Read full commentPosted in Like dolphins can swim
I think sideways rain is like
Posted on Fri, 21 Feb 2025
I think sideways rain is like gravity pockets, a localised gravity phenomenon that follows me and hits me with alarmingly inconvenient timing. One that stands out for me was a time in the 70s when at 3.a.m it attacked me as I was working on a...
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A beautiful way to start my
Posted on Sun, 29 Dec 2024
A beautiful way to start my Sunday morning. I particularly love the first verse. i prefer to take people as I find them and always enjoy relaxed company.
Read full commentPosted in Kind, wise lives
I love the 'safe bud' line.
Posted on Fri, 25 Oct 2024
I love the 'safe bud' line. It's good to know plans are being laid for a new beginning next spring. Loved this poem.
Read full commentPosted in Tumultuous Autumn
A short, powerful poem, which
Posted on Mon, 05 Aug 2024
A short, powerful poem, which captures two themes at once. Both eluding to emotions that contrast and make up who we are or can become. Thank you
Read full commentPosted in In the summer heat
I shall be reading this again
Posted on Sat, 04 Nov 2023
I shall be reading this again. I loved it and it sent both chills and excitement through my veins. a brilliant take on the IP and a beautifully written piece.
Read full commentPosted in Persona non grata
Powerful, symetrical and
Posted on Tue, 31 Oct 2023
Powerful, symetrical and fantastic imagery. Worth a Pick of the Day and a part in any anthology....Luigi strikes again !
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Oh what memories...loved this
Posted on Wed, 11 Oct 2023
Oh what memories...loved this one.
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