Freedom’s Lament J ustice was meant for all But is stolen by the few A poor person’s freedom hits a wall In a world of greed inequality’s nothing new...
Odd Sock Lament Where do all the odd socks go? Paired for life They leave in strife Leaving neatly folded rows Maybe by the washer eaten Or buried ‘...
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I don't know why, but I was
Posted on Fri, 26 Sep 2014
I don't know why, but I was taken back to an evening class for so-called beginners Welsh. Truth is, it was a gossip club and very clicky. I couldn't handle most of what was said and it was clear that most of the class were far beyond me. So I...
This is the kind of writing I find most powerful. You seem to be examining your thoughts and expressing them. People often recoil from being preached to and this piece doesn't. Your essay is more likely to spawn many others on the subject. ...
I don't know why, but I was
Posted on Fri, 26 Sep 2014
I don't know why, but I was taken back to an evening class for so-called beginners Welsh. Truth is, it was a gossip club and very clicky. I couldn't handle most of what was said and it was clear that most of the class were far beyond me. So I...
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Belonging etc
Posted on Fri, 19 Sep 2014
This is the kind of writing I find most powerful. You seem to be examining your thoughts and expressing them. People often recoil from being preached to and this piece doesn't. Your essay is more likely to spawn many others on the subject. ...
Read full commentPosted in Belonging, Loyalty, Freedom and Independence (Late I.P.) 566 words
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