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Interest Upon Interest Interest upon interest Ever onward, upward grows Making mountains of cash Why does it never me glad? I bade the bank, guard my...
Alone With every fear filled step of dread Deeper into the darkness now I tread A lonely trail with no end in sight I blindly tread the eternal night...
This Mortal Coil This day I have the peace I prayed for Yesterday’s pleas seemed cold ignored My tears and aching soul cried a sad lament A new dawn...
The latest Inspiration Point gave me an opportunity to rework a piece that had been inspired by a New Testament passage.This time I chose the five senses.
66 of my comments have received 66 Great Feedback votes
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I too stumbled across this
Posted on Mon, 08 Sep 2014
I too stumbled across this piece, but I am glad I did. I offer no advice because I don't believe it needs it. This was written from my favourite place - the bottom of your heart and it is a beautiful piece.
I don't know why, but I was taken back to an evening class for so-called beginners Welsh. Truth is, it was a gossip club and very clicky. I couldn't handle most of what was said and it was clear that most of the class were far beyond me. So I...
This is the kind of writing I find most powerful. You seem to be examining your thoughts and expressing them. People often recoil from being preached to and this piece doesn't. Your essay is more likely to spawn many others on the subject. ...
I too stumbled across this
Posted on Mon, 08 Sep 2014
I too stumbled across this piece, but I am glad I did. I offer no advice because I don't believe it needs it. This was written from my favourite place - the bottom of your heart and it is a beautiful piece.
Thank you.
Read full commentPosted in A difference of Opinion
I don't know why, but I was
Posted on Fri, 26 Sep 2014
I don't know why, but I was taken back to an evening class for so-called beginners Welsh. Truth is, it was a gossip club and very clicky. I couldn't handle most of what was said and it was clear that most of the class were far beyond me. So I...
Read full commentPosted in Buttercups and Daisies
Belonging etc
Posted on Fri, 19 Sep 2014
This is the kind of writing I find most powerful. You seem to be examining your thoughts and expressing them. People often recoil from being preached to and this piece doesn't. Your essay is more likely to spawn many others on the subject. ...
Read full commentPosted in Belonging, Loyalty, Freedom and Independence (Late I.P.) 566 words
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