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I had to read this one or

Posted on Fri, 05 Apr 2019

I had to read this one or twice - it's very imaginative!

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Posted in pondering

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What a lovely positive

Posted on Sat, 30 Mar 2019

What a lovely positive message in this piece!

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Posted in Perspective

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if you're looking for

Posted on Thu, 28 Mar 2019

if you're looking for suggestions Harry - this is set in the USA right? If so, kettles aren't really a thing there - even more so in the past (am guessing because of the typewriter). Also 'nip, sip' etc - pull instead of nip?

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Posted in Hunting for Duck (5)

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Some vivid description in

Posted on Mon, 25 Mar 2019

Some vivid description in this thought provoking piece. Is it part of something longer? 

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Posted in Jonathan Roven is Lost

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What a lovely idea for the IP

Posted on Sat, 23 Mar 2019

What a lovely idea for the IP Rhiannon! I especially like this one, but the others are great too. This would make a lovely collection to read aloud to very small children. Do you know someone who could illustrate them?

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Posted in Kids' Colours 3)

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Hi Sim - people tend to

Posted on Tue, 05 Feb 2019

Hi Sim - people tend to remove their pieces once they submit them - but it depends on individual publishers - speaking of which, I don't know what size your finished work is going to be, but this might interest you?

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Posted in A MOVEABLE FEAST (from Ribbentrop's Chair)

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Very pleased to hear things

Posted on Mon, 18 Mar 2019

Very pleased to hear things ended on a high note TK - I don't think I would have done it either!

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Posted in Galaxy Part Four.

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Another great little nature

Posted on Sat, 16 Mar 2019

Another great little nature poem and photo. Have you ever thought of making a small collection of these? Following on from your letter to your father, it would be a lovely legacy. Who knows what those views will look like in 100 years from now...

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Posted in On Pippin’s Hill

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Again, I'm so pleased you

Posted on Tue, 12 Mar 2019

Again, I'm so pleased you enjoyed having a go at this challenge (see my comment on  Rhiannon's piece) - I hope you do have another attempt. On a personal note - I remember you saying how your boss died very suddenly, which is sad etc but the fall...

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Posted in Last Week I Lost My Job (Rimus Dissolutas)

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Oh no - poor Lisa! You've

Posted on Sun, 10 Mar 2019

Oh no - poor Lisa! You've described all the reactions in a very believable way. Glad to see another part - I was getting worried you might be stuck

A few typos:

 'they had burgers and chips for lunch, proper burgers with mince, with...

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Posted in Angel 41 (Lisa's)

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