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I enjoyed this defence of

Posted on Fri, 21 Dec 2018

I enjoyed this defence of dragons - thank you for posting it. If you're looking for suggestions, then perhaps it could do with a bit of cutting down - hope that helps

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Posted in I Could Never Kill The Dragon

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Happy Solstice to you too

Posted on Fri, 21 Dec 2018

Happy Solstice to you too Otterman. That extra minute is something I very much look forward to!

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Posted in Solstice Observance

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What the others all said -

Posted on Fri, 21 Dec 2018

What the others all said - but also, there is something very wonderful about hanging laundry in the garden - the precise order one has to follow, like a counting game, and then taking it back off again when dry. You have reminded me of this all...

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Posted in love and laundry

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no matter how the fresh air/

Posted on Wed, 19 Dec 2018

no matter how the fresh air/ how fresh the air?

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Posted in No Good News

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I really enjoyed this orginal

Posted on Sun, 16 Dec 2018

I really enjoyed this orginal and well written piece. A wonderful ending especially. Thank you Theshy!

If you do another draft, there are a few places where you've used the present tense - or kept it in by mistake (not sure if you started...

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Posted in A Light Supper

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I really enojyed this little

Posted on Wed, 12 Dec 2018

I really enojyed this little slice of life writing but I wanted more!

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Posted in Results: 1979

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I’m very sorry you’re not

Posted on Sat, 01 Dec 2018

I’m very sorry you’re not well Hudson and I hope you improve soon, but to be honest I’m not 100% sorry if it results in a piece of sparkling prose like this. It’s the best thing I’ve seen on ABCTales for a while. Well done!

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Posted in Another Cock-Eyed Christmas

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ok, I've just re-read this

Posted on Mon, 19 Nov 2018

ok, I've just re-read this part - I do realise this might all change if, as you say, she gets more space in the next parts, but so far she seems to me to be just a foil for gillis - someone to whom he speaks and who occasionally relays...

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Posted in Aura (22)

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Fabulous title - and I really

Posted on Thu, 22 Nov 2018

Fabulous title - and I really like the poem. Do you think perhaps that first 'but' might be a bit unnecessary?

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Posted in Poem Written On A Plane Over The Atlantic Attempting To Justify A Life Of Debauchery

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this is developing at just

Posted on Wed, 31 Oct 2018

this is developing at just the right pace - nicely balanced too, between local colour, dialogue and action. So much harder to get right than people think

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