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nicely written - I prefer
Posted on Wed, 30 Jan 2019
nicely written - I prefer this piece to the one you posted yesterday - perhaps because the writing is a bit more relaxed?
Read full commentPosted in The Tar Pit (1 of 9)
Di, from experience with one
Posted on Sat, 29 Sep 2018
Di, from experience with one of my sons, a diagnosis is really important - and it can take ages to arrange unless you get it done privately which can cost a fortune. A diagnosis of dyspraxia meant my son was given extra time in GCSEs (whatever...
Read full commentPosted in A Martian in the Closet
No sense in talking about the
Posted on Wed, 20 Jun 2018
No sense in talking about the cracks.
Blokes don’t need help,
just a good night’s sleep
a shower
a shit
a shave and
a shag
my father said
my mates said
my brother said
that makes me so...
Read full commentPosted in The Iceberg
I really like the meticulous
Posted on Sun, 26 Nov 2017
I really like the meticulous detail in this piece - the timetable of the woman's day works well as a frame for the narrative, and the small events come across as very authentic, as does the relationship between the couple.
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Read full commentPosted in May you live all the days of your life
Hi - what a fascinating peice
Posted on Mon, 10 Feb 2014
Hi - what a fascinating peice this is! it was really interesting the way you compared the different geographical prejudices. My only criticisim is that we're kind of left hanging .... there's so little about when you're actually there. I was...
Read full commentPosted in 7 days in Tehran
Hello fining - welcome to ABC
Posted on Sat, 04 Jan 2014
Hello fining - welcome to ABC. This has a nice flow to it, but since you've specifically asked, I do have a couple of observations:
firstly, it might have been better to post the prologue and chapter one seperately - easier for...
Read full commentPosted in August Shadow (working title): Prologue
Small edit required in this
Posted on Sun, 17 May 2026
Small edit required in this part. You have some lines pasted twice, starting here:
“Woollen tea‑cosies?” Amanderella pondered.
Read full commentPosted in Amanderella Gottsnobbler and the Bangolin Tree Chapter 16
oh - ok! Well your aim was
Posted on Fri, 15 May 2026
oh - ok! Well your aim was much better than mine in that case - apologies!
Read full commentPosted in Glenda the Wendle Chapter 5 part 2
Lovely to see another poem
Posted on Fri, 15 May 2026
Lovely to see another poem from you Jenny - wonderfully positive!
Read full commentPosted in Where Thoughts Take Me
It's a good story, but I must
Posted on Fri, 15 May 2026
It's a good story, but I must say, Stanley looks like something out of a Munch painting and much as I love Munch, I wouldn't want to be showing Stanley to a child - they'd never sleep again!
Read full commentPosted in Glenda the Wendle Chapter 5 part 2
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