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Madagascar

I am just trying to write myself out of being stuck
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389 of my comments have received 391 Great Feedback votes

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I’ll look forward to reading

Posted on Sat, 06 Apr 2019

I’ll look forward to reading it!

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Posted in The First Night of Spring

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This is a great modern

Posted on Sat, 06 Apr 2019

This is a great modern fairytale. If you decide to do any more work on it, perhaps that last paragraph could be a bit stronger? Lovely as it is though!

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Posted in The First Night of Spring

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I had to read this one or

Posted on Fri, 05 Apr 2019

I had to read this one or twice - it's very imaginative!

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Posted in pondering

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What a lovely positive

Posted on Sat, 30 Mar 2019

What a lovely positive message in this piece!

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Posted in Perspective

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beautiful description - that

Posted on Thu, 28 Mar 2019

beautiful description - that evening walk sounds like one of those small things that bring a disproportionate joy. I love how we're lucky enough to get little glimpses into where people live!

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Posted in herring gull gallantry

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if you're looking for

Posted on Thu, 28 Mar 2019

if you're looking for suggestions Harry - this is set in the USA right? If so, kettles aren't really a thing there - even more so in the past (am guessing because of the typewriter). Also 'nip, sip' etc - pull instead of nip?

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Posted in Hunting for Duck (5)

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Some vivid description in

Posted on Mon, 25 Mar 2019

Some vivid description in this thought provoking piece. Is it part of something longer? 

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Posted in Jonathan Roven is Lost

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What a lovely idea for the IP

Posted on Sat, 23 Mar 2019

What a lovely idea for the IP Rhiannon! I especially like this one, but the others are great too. This would make a lovely collection to read aloud to very small children. Do you know someone who could illustrate them?

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Posted in Kids' Colours 3)

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Some wonderful lines in this

Posted on Fri, 22 Mar 2019

Some wonderful lines in this joyful poem Di, (and you've just given me an idea for the new IP so thank you!)

is 'grren' a typo?

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Posted in gorse

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Hi Sim - people tend to

Posted on Tue, 05 Feb 2019

Hi Sim - people tend to remove their pieces once they submit them - but it depends on individual publishers - speaking of which, I don't know what size your finished work is going to be, but this might interest you?

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Posted in A MOVEABLE FEAST (from Ribbentrop's Chair)

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