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I have 17 stories published in one collection on the site.
My stories have been read 423114 times and 170 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Madagascar

I am just trying to write myself out of being stuck
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1928 of my comments have received 1976 Great Feedback votes

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Really enjoying this - it is

Posted on Fri, 12 Nov 2021

Really enjoying this - it is a little confusing timeline-wise - and also I'm not sure when it's set, but I'm not sure about money laundering rules - wouldn't thet be an issue with the bag of money?

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Posted in Arabian Monkfish (Part Two)

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This is our Poem of the Week

Posted on Sun, 23 May 2021

This is our Poem of the Week - Congratulations!

It's also our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day

please share/retweet if you enjoyed it too

Picture Credit:https://tinyurl.com/2tmvy99m

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Posted in Sun-Light

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catching up - I can offer you

Posted on Sun, 14 Feb 2021

catching up - I can offer you a comic moment, after Jane's poor daughter's grim one - a man, coat over what were clearly pyjamas, obviously just jumped out of bed and realised he'd forgotten valentine's day, had tied his overexicted dog to a...

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Posted in The Opposite of Love

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Beautifully done, and a

Posted on Wed, 22 Apr 2020

Beautifully done, and a perfect daily pick. Swan stalking obsession eh? I wonder if there's a helpline for that. Seriously though, I once had the privilege of having a swans' nest at the bottom of my garden, and watching them build, then guard...

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Posted in I Want To Tell You Things

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What they all say ^ ^ - a

Posted on Wed, 25 Mar 2020

What they all say ^ ^ - a fine piece of writing, but I hope you go and spend some time with the lemurs and kittens of facebook now. You know it makes sense xx

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Posted in Just Put Me In The Fridge

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reading your comment, there's

Posted on Sat, 14 Dec 2019

reading your comment, there's a real sense of it in the second verse. Suicide is brutal to those it leaves behind

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Posted in The Worst

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coming over here, making all

Posted on Thu, 31 Oct 2019

coming over here, making all that noise...smiley

They are lovely to watch aren...

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Posted in Geese

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You're right - and while, of

Posted on Sat, 10 Aug 2019

You're right - and while, of course, once you've written something it stops being your personal property with your interpretation and becomes whatever the reader reads it as being, I think these readings add a really interesting dimension to the...

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Posted in In perpetuity

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I really like all the detail

Posted on Thu, 07 Feb 2019

I really like all the detail in this and also think the two main characters are shaping up nicely

A couple of suggestions:

The dialogue as they walk around the town - it's a bit block of text followed by block of text and I'm not...

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Posted in Charlie and Eliza (Pt 1)

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nicely written - I prefer

Posted on Wed, 30 Jan 2019

nicely written - I prefer this piece to the one you posted yesterday - perhaps because the writing is a bit more relaxed?

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Posted in The Tar Pit (1 of 9)

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