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Really enjoying this - it is
Posted on Fri, 12 Nov 2021
Really enjoying this - it is a little confusing timeline-wise - and also I'm not sure when it's set, but I'm not sure about money laundering rules - wouldn't thet be an issue with the bag of money?
catching up - I can offer you a comic moment, after Jane's poor daughter's grim one - a man, coat over what were clearly pyjamas, obviously just jumped out of bed and realised he'd forgotten valentine's day, had tied his overexicted dog to a...
Beautifully done, and a perfect daily pick. Swan stalking obsession eh? I wonder if there's a helpline for that. Seriously though, I once had the privilege of having a swans' nest at the bottom of my garden, and watching them build, then guard...
What they all say ^ ^ - a fine piece of writing, but I hope you go and spend some time with the lemurs and kittens of facebook now. You know it makes sense xx
You're right - and while, of course, once you've written something it stops being your personal property with your interpretation and becomes whatever the reader reads it as being, I think these readings add a really interesting dimension to the...
Really enjoying this - it is
Posted on Fri, 12 Nov 2021
Really enjoying this - it is a little confusing timeline-wise - and also I'm not sure when it's set, but I'm not sure about money laundering rules - wouldn't thet be an issue with the bag of money?
Read full commentPosted in Arabian Monkfish (Part Two)
This is our Poem of the Week
Posted on Sun, 23 May 2021
This is our Poem of the Week - Congratulations!
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Read full commentPosted in Sun-Light
catching up - I can offer you
Posted on Sun, 14 Feb 2021
catching up - I can offer you a comic moment, after Jane's poor daughter's grim one - a man, coat over what were clearly pyjamas, obviously just jumped out of bed and realised he'd forgotten valentine's day, had tied his overexicted dog to a...
Read full commentPosted in The Opposite of Love
Beautifully done, and a
Posted on Wed, 22 Apr 2020
Beautifully done, and a perfect daily pick. Swan stalking obsession eh? I wonder if there's a helpline for that. Seriously though, I once had the privilege of having a swans' nest at the bottom of my garden, and watching them build, then guard...
Read full commentPosted in I Want To Tell You Things
What they all say ^ ^ - a
Posted on Wed, 25 Mar 2020
What they all say ^ ^ - a fine piece of writing, but I hope you go and spend some time with the lemurs and kittens of facebook now. You know it makes sense xx
Read full commentPosted in Just Put Me In The Fridge
reading your comment, there's
Posted on Sat, 14 Dec 2019
reading your comment, there's a real sense of it in the second verse. Suicide is brutal to those it leaves behind
Read full commentPosted in The Worst
coming over here, making all
Posted on Thu, 31 Oct 2019
coming over here, making all that noise...
They are lovely to watch aren...
Read full commentPosted in Geese
You're right - and while, of
Posted on Sat, 10 Aug 2019
You're right - and while, of course, once you've written something it stops being your personal property with your interpretation and becomes whatever the reader reads it as being, I think these readings add a really interesting dimension to the...
Read full commentPosted in In perpetuity
I really like all the detail
Posted on Thu, 07 Feb 2019
I really like all the detail in this and also think the two main characters are shaping up nicely
A couple of suggestions:
The dialogue as they walk around the town - it's a bit block of text followed by block of text and I'm not...
Read full commentPosted in Charlie and Eliza (Pt 1)
nicely written - I prefer
Posted on Wed, 30 Jan 2019
nicely written - I prefer this piece to the one you posted yesterday - perhaps because the writing is a bit more relaxed?
Read full commentPosted in The Tar Pit (1 of 9)
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